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Oh my word! I loved this demo! I think this VN is adorable even if it was a lil short but I love Mr. Grey and the MC already. I think you did a fantastic job for your first game and you should be proud of yourself because you did amazing! (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)

I loved this game! London and his squeaks were so adorable whenever he got flustered! I especially loved the part where he had to come to our rescue after he found out we were missing. Poor guy was scared out of his mind over our safety. I know you mentioned there would be some grammar mistakes, and there were, but I completely understand seeing as I'm mildly dyslexic myself. I was wondering if you'd like someone to maybe help you out with the grammar? Cause I'd love to help if that's the case.

I don't think they would mind. As long as you credit them as the original maker of the game, because in my opinion that's a really good Idea.