Aaryn, you are very good at telling stories. You really makes us get involved with the characters. But that last chapter really got me. As I have nobody to talk about this, I´ll just write it here.
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I felt so betrayed by Bredan that I was already hoping for Zack to get another roommate. I realized how I also didn't pay attention to the tips given during the story and notice how Bredan was playing him. He seems to me just a spoiled rich brat playing with his gay roommate.
Nobody kneels to pick up a towel that they reach with their hand. Cody also wouldn't have the reaction he had as Zack entered the room and wouldn´t apologize for being naked considering he saw Zack with 3 other naked boys the day before. He could see Zack didn´t left the room for being shy, but for being desolated. And what can't Zack do that Cody can do so well? Just don´t know what to expect.
But when I went to test the "pervy" line and Ash opened his eyes, then I got really upset with Bredan. And to think that Zack probably won't know any of that just because he was respectful.
Anyway, waiting for the next chapter to see if I recover emotionally.
Obs: They talk about when Zack said he was gay even if he doesn´t go to the restaurant in the first chapter.
Good job