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ehy there!

i understand your issue. i can add separate pages to the pack if you need them, just not right away. i will as soon as i'm able. 

That said, if you don't intend to reach level 20, first time i used it in small i was able to write everything on it despite the size (though, of course, bigger is comfyer. 

If you might want to try and cut them digitally yourself, you just need a free image editing tool/software; open the files in them, cut image to fit the page, export and save, then import the single pages you cut onto a new A4 image, export that one and then print each page individually.

other than that, i ask just to check: have you tried in a print shop? i myself do not own a A3 printer, i always have to go to them to print my sheets.  

Or, at the vert least, if you instruct me on the rules of the game, I might do it for free if it's about minor changes to fit the different infos, but it will take some time, given I'd work on it on free time when I can and when I want.

Hey there, I'm so happy to hear that you made multiple character with my sheets! 

As for a collaboration, I'd love to work on either adapting my booklet to another game or make a new one! Unfortunately, as of now I can't really dedicate myself to a free collaboration, but if you were willing to commission me for it, it would be more than doable! I

In case you're interested, feel free to contact me directly either via mail or social. 

no prob

The one I specify in the description, CC0

hey there! 

so, the fact is: i commissioned a translation, but my translator had to take its time on it, and in the meantime i started to rewrite the rules, because after some testing there were some things that to me did not work well anymore. 

with that, i decided to just committ to fully finishing the new version and in case giving it to my translator afterwards.

i'm super happy that there is somebody interested in this project, but sadly at the moment i don't have the time to focus on my current projects, the new version of this and also the translation of the old one. 
sooo...what i can say that i am still working on it, but it probably won't come anytime soon. 

really sorry for that. 

A really nice experience, that hit way too close to home uhuh. 

thanks for putting these emotions into a game!

Sorry for the late response!

Well...it depends on what your're asking, which you haven't explained it yet. 

What you want is a custom player "screen", or foldable sheet like this, but with sections specific to what you need?
If it's the above case (so reusing the same design, decoration and aesthetic, just moving sections around and maybe drawing some new scrools, items and decorations here and there) that wouldn't be too expensive, around maybe 60€ (variable in case of more complex requests). 

if you are asking for a complete redesign, just keeping the overall layout of the booklet but with all different insides, that might cost more. 

Hey there! glad that you like it!

You mean like a proper DM screen? i could, and i'm sure it'd be fun, but i probably won't in the near future. These little things i make are for myself first and foremost, things that i actively use, and then decide to publish them.
Given i never master while we play Dnd, as of now i don't really have the motivation to make something like that, uhuh. 

With that said, if you would like a DM screen illustrated by me now instead of in the unspecified future when i decide to narrate a campaign, you can ask for a commission!

I've yet to play the game, but i have to say: This page is cool as hell! what a neat idea to have me try the gameplay while scrolling, uhuh.

you're welcome, glad i could help!

Thanks! It makes me so happy to hear this, uhuh. 

it's an archived file, you need to extract the folder inside with all the images. if you don't have software on your pc to open archives, try installing winrar, winzip or whichever you may prefere/find. 

Also, unless you've specifically chosen this version, i'd recommend using the new sheet i made in the link at the start of the page.

Let me know if there are ulterior issues!

I can't thank you enough for making this game. it just clicked every button i needed to push, and all the movement system flow together soo well. i dunno how you created a chemistry so elegant, but it works. 

i have some minor complaints, like that maybe more time could've been spent hyping up a little bit the final boss, maybe more notes scattered around, a bit of lore on the textless graves we can find hidden around, some paintings. i don't know how to make it, but i felt quite disconnected from the context and the story.
sure, it wasn't the focus, but it has its importance. 

also, i thin kthe ability to at least teleport to the last checkpoint might be useful and prevent some form of softblocking. at a point i managed to bullshit my way through almost all the wall-slide section without having it; i was enjoying the challenge, but if i wanted to go back to try a different path and to wait for the power up, it would've been quite the pain in the ass.

other than that, thanks a lot, i love this game and can't wait for what you'll do next!

....and yes, of course, goat mommy crush me between your tighs.

Grazie anche solo per avermi fatto scoprire rinascimento 2E uhuh

Sorry for that. these were made back when i was a little less professional, uhuh. i'm glad they were useful though!

I do realize they are quite old though and not representative of how i do things now, so at some point, when i have time, i think i'll remake them completely.

Hey there!

My name is Lorenzo, aka TornioDuva. i'm an illustrator/aspiring game designer from italy. i do write, read and listen to english perfectly fine, be warned that my spoken english might be "simplistic", uhuh.  

If you have an idea but you are in need of someone for art assets and in general to be another voice in the team, i am available for a side project! plus, i wanted to grow some experience in using godot, so i'm particularly interested in this jam.

If you want to look what i'm good at, here's my portfolio site: https://lorenzo-andreozzi.carrd.co

I can manage animations too, but i'd ask you to keep your goals simple, better if pixel art; i know how to animate, but i'm not very experienced at it, and i will likely have to relearn some stuff for this project in case. 

If i might be of use to you, let me know here or by email here: tornioduva@gmail.com

ooh, ok, capisco, capisco. se questa è stata una scelta consapevole allora nulla da dire! semplicemente quello è il flavour che piace anche a me e mi è subito saltata all'occhio come cosa, uhuh. 

concludo dicendo solo che se effettivamente l'obiettivo qui era di fare un sistema più aperto e meno specifico di TTG o altri, come effettivamente è, la presentazione generale va un po' a cozzare con questa cosa, come hai puntualizzato anche te.

 personalmente, visto che gli hai già costruito un'estetica molto caratteristica, penderei più verso quella parte. 

Glad you liked them! 

i personally doubt i am gonna update these specifically in any way, it's an old work made as an exercise and now i'm doing kind of different things. so, unless something specific is requested or commissioned, probably these will remain as they are. 

that said, i might in the future make more card and icon layouts, now with my new techniques and style. 

ehilà! sono Lorenzo, del comics. 

Sono riuscito effettivamente a leggermelo e ti lascio giusto qualche commento leggero; in generale mi è piaciuto, le tacche corpo e la durabilità equipaggiamento sono sicuro costruiscano una buona struttura di opzioni, ma con un costo che ti mantiene l'attenzione attiva, sarei decisamente curioso di provarlo. 

a livello meccanico contenutistico non ho nulla da dire. 

Gli unici commenti che mi sento di fare sono più estetici/di presentazione/composizione, ovvero:

• Considerando quanto è piccolo e diretto questo sistema, livello e punti esperienza secondo me avrebbero più impatto di atmosfera se fossero chiamati qualcosa come Rango, status, o cazzutaggine, boh; il fatto che i soldi sono l'esperienza è carina come cosa, ma a quel punto ti direi perché avere i PX e non direttamente dire "con 1000 monete in città ti puoi comprare un rango, e se sei di rango X fai queste cose".
• Caratteristiche di classe funziona ed è diretto come nome, maaa...non so, anche lì qualcosa come lavoro, carriera, classe e basta, o cul de sac sociale forse potrebbe rendere l'idea in modo meno articolato. 
• L'arbitro come nome per il GM...ok, si capisce anche qui ed è più che sufficente per rendere l'idea, maaa boh, qualcosa di più caratteristico come "un giocatore interpreta il Bambogiaro, ovvero quella persona che attorno al fuoco tende a discore più di quanto gli altri siano disposti ad ascoltare, ed è colui che racconterà la storia delle vostre gesta", o qualcosa di simile che poi vai a definire come GM. 
• Questa è ancora più soggettiva e tralasciabile come cosa delle altre, maaa....per la classe dell'avventuriero, il Bardo come caratteristica secondo me è un po' fuori posto; ci sta, ma visto l'andazzo generale forse qualcosa più come "Artista" generale proprio ce lo vedrei meglio, meno specifico. oppure specifico, ma nel senso che, come per il maestro d'arma, è artista in un ambito specifico a sua scelta (scrittura, teatro, canto, castelli di carte, sculture di fango, ecc.)

E niente, basta. queste sono osservazioni molto soggettive basate sul come piacciono a me le cose, quindi prendile pure con tutte le pinze che vuoi. 

thanks a lot!

mmh...ok, this i like. so this makes it more of a bet with a "high risk, high reward" kind of system. you have agency over your casting in the sense that you can decide how much "power" to allocate to it, while increasing the risk of blowing in your face. 

this is good, but still aesthetically goes in another direction compared to what i wanted to convey here. the guess action in mine does not have any advantage or disadvantage, no matter how you do it, and in that way you are completely blind to fate and luck. one might consider it pointless for that, but to me the fact that you have to take active part in abandoning yourself to luck has meaning.

in your system the image is that of someone who treats magic more like a pressure valve, which isn't bad i want to reiterate, just different; i'm thinking about a game with these two different kind of approach to magic as a differentiation in class, uhuh, i think that would really be cool. 

on that note, if in the future i wanted to make a full fledged game and returned to these ideas plus yours, can i use it with credit?

don't worry, thanks for trying to explain it uhuh. 

ok, now i got it more; most of my confusion came from the fact that i did not remember what fudge dices were, only now i thought of checking that uhuh. 

now, this feels like a pretty tight and functional system, also quite fun in the way you can and have to manage your dice results. 
It also....feels like a pretty different system compared to what i wanted to do.
what i mean is, without the guess mechanic it kinda of loses the vibe i was going for with this. 
sure, i haven't properly tested it, so i don't know if it's actually fun, but still. 

i guess you could say that rolling a pool of dice also stays within the leap of faith idea, but i liked that you had to  take the extra step in guessing it first. 

still, thanks for putting your idea out here, it's always interesting. this one, unless you can convince me otherwise, i don't think i'm gonna implement it in like your other suggestion. if other players like your variation though,  they are free to read it here and change it, of course!

You're welcome!

uuh...sorry if i am a bit slow, but just to be sure of what you're suggesting here:

this is a visualization of both ends of possibile guess results, only that now if you guessed above the result you gain + and if below you gain -? and then you spend + and - in the EM table instead of rolling if you guessed 7+ figures away or use them to cancel each other? 

if i got it right...not gonna lie, maybe it's more articulated then what i wanted to do here uhuh. at the same time i like the idea of exhaust magic being just excess magic, not necessarily negative as i put it, and you can spend either negative or positive excess magic for different effects on a different table. 

again, this is definetely something that threatens to spiral into a way more complicated system, but....i like the idea of it!

....if i got it right, uhuh. if not, please have patience. if you have other ideas we can also change platform of discussion if you want. 

Hey, thanks! Glad you like it! 

Your suggestion is indeed pretty cool, I might genuinely add it (I'll credit you if that's the case), I just need to think wether it fits as a base rule or as an additional one as suggestion for effect for equip, abilities, ecc, to keep the overall atmosphere of this system. 

for the license, I indicated in the info in this page creative Commons 1.0, the free for all one uhuh.

I searched this mosaic strict you suggested and it's indeed a really interesting way of categorizing this things, but what would it mean to publish it as a piece of it? Just adding it in the description to let people know what it is? 

Thanks! and well, that is the hope uhuh.

noted, thanks

thanks! i'm glad you like it, and you're welcome

cf back to school

i'd love to! the problem is that i don't play pathfinder, so i'd have to learn it and play it a bit first, so to understand the sensibilities of a player. either that or someone assists me in the modding process of this one.

the first case is the most unlinkely, since i don't have the time at the moment to start a new session;
for the second one, i'm absolutely willing to follow someone's directions, either through a direct commission request or if someone just lists what changes it would need and then somewhere in the future i'll review it. 

sure! what i ask is to not directly resell this pack and to give credit to me in your game for the art of the tiles. 

i'm glad you liked it! I hope it will be useful for your players then.

thanks!

thanks! i'm glad you liked it!

don't worry, i suggest to donate only to those that have to resources to spend on smaller creators, i myself am not one of them, uhuh. 

that said, please, if this becomes part of of a project, or you want to modify it in some way to create something else, let me know, i'm always very curious about how my stuff is used. 

thanks for the update! it's sad to hear, but don't worry, take your time :)

thanks! i'll definetely try it out and see what i can do with it as soon as i have the time

Thanks!

UPDATE: you can do whatever you want with these assets, i updated the license. 

hello! are you asking me if you can make a game with this assets and sell it? because if that's the case, i'm sorry but no. the license these assets are under is, as indicated at the bottom of the description, one that allows you to use, share and edit them as long as you're not reselling it.  Now, if you want to print them, do something with them and then sell the result between you and your friends, i cannot interevene and you can do as you wish, as long as it's not a public thing. 

if you're asking me to make a game....eee, i'm sorry, but i don't have the time. these i made as an exercise, but i'm occupied with other stuff as of now.