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torin59

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Yeah, it's headed towards the MC doing the cheating as she gets corrupted and tricked into doing increasingly lewd acts with other people even though she has a boyfriend.

What do you mean by 'safe'?

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Incredible game and has way darker themes that I expected, but is very enjoyable to play. After hitting a few of the current version dead ends for my favorite characters, I need to force myself to stop playing so I can enjoy the full experience later.

Overall incredible game, huge selection of characters, and good control over how dark it gets, aside from a few characters that have really dark paths that don't involve the MC for a while. 

Tons of potential here and even what's out right now is one hell of a game.

The game ends if you don't agree to her request, then shows you where you end up in life afterwards. If you want to actually play the game then agree to her request.

Almost every scene while the girl is working where there's a selection of responses, the game freezes after making one of the choices. I can't believe I paid money for a game that constantly breaks, causing me to lose all my progress since the last save.

Flamingomon already answered the 5th scene that you're missing. The 8th just below that comes from working at the cafe instead of the bakery, do lewd things until you have the option to quit, then go work at the bar. You'll be able to text one of your contacts to help get you off and that's the scene that's missing.

How do you get the final two? I can't figure out what I'm missing for those.

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There's not a ton of content yet, but somehow I've already dumped more time into this game than I care to admit. This has so much potential and I'm excited to see how it turns out. I've also never seen heart-shaped nipples before, but I'm totally into them now!

Some suggestions:

- When you're changing into gym clothes in the park, you appear to be doing it behind a bush. It would be great for this to have a chance for you to get caught. 

- In the first mission there are times when you are too drunk, then blackout and wake up in the maintenance room naked. Currently, you just go get your clothes from the shower room but it would be interesting if you had to walk around naked to find out where they are and retrieve them.

- A bug I noticed on the screens with interactable objects is that they only highlight when the mouse is not moving. She had her desire maxed out and hearts floating around and the hearts would also freeze every time the curse moved. This led to me having to hover over an object, stop moving the mouse, then wait a couple of seconds to see if the object would light up. If they could light up while the mouse is moving then it would be a much less annoying process.

- These rooms with clickable objects are also not very intuitive and it's easy to enter a room, see no icons to click on, then leave. It would help a lot to have some indication on the screen or part of the UI indicating that there are objects you can interact with.

- The screen thumbnails for navigation on the bottom left in the first mission all look very similar and swapping between the 1st and 2nd floors then taking a hallway was a little confusing and I'd often find myself swapping back and forth between floors on accident when I meant to take a hallway. Maybe add small number icons in a corner of the thumbnails to show what floor it's on?

- I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but if you do something like wear a skirt without panties and then close the wardrobe, there's a comment about how you shouldn't do that, then the wardrobe opens back up to fix it. However, if you do that, then swap to a different tab like from gym close to everyday clothes, any event that changes your clothes for you such as changing in the park will let you do so even if you'd end up wearing things you normally couldn't.

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I really hate Matt, which is why the blackmail route is one of my favorites. Some suggestions:

- A picture of a girl flashing her panties isn't very good blackmail material and while it could ruin her reputation, it doesn't seem anywhere near enough to get her expelled. It's also not really enough to get her to strip naked in a locker room for him. He really needs some better blackmail material to make the rest of the plotline fit better. I felt like I had to have her act out of character before he got enough blackmail that she wouldn't have a choice but to obey.

- I tried ignoring him later in the game by not going to any rooms he texted me to meet him in, yet there were no consequences and the game continued on as if you'd obeyed. It would be interesting to see alternative endings for disobeying based on how much blackmail material he has at the time. 

- Matt offering Damien to do things to you is an interesting idea I'd like to see more with. Matt corrupting a mutual crush between you and Damien by forcing you to do things with him watching or forcing you to allow him to participate would be a good addition.

- There's a scene where Matt has you naked with the collar on and writing words all over your body. There's not much payoff since he's the only one to see it. It would be a lot better if he took you on a walk outside like that and forced you into the begging position in front of strangers while you have the writing on your body.

Overall, I like the plotline more blackmail-focused and less of a voluntary sub/dom relationship. I'm definitely looking forward to where the plotline leads in future updates.

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I came for the great animations and stayed for the plot and relationship development. Incredible game! The animations were done really well and I felt the distinctiveness of their personalities that made the whole experience feel even more enjoyable.

The only thing I think it might be missing is being able to see the results of a bad pathway ending. For example, selling Lauren to the Orochi was hot and I liked seeing that play out, even though I immediately loaded back before it happened. Seeing the results of the lost bet from Jasmine's party, in the beginning, would have been good as well, though how it went was believable for how early in the game it was.

What I really felt like was missing was towards the end when looking for Stabb's help prior to the big showdown, the Gangbangers were discussing giving you a choice, which felt perfectly set up to be one of the game choices with branching results. I liked the way it went, but it would have been even better to be able to have a choice there that leads to a bad ending and seeing what happens to the girls, like with the Orochi deal, prior to being saved. Being able to see how things can go wrong makes it even more rewarding when they go well.


Edit - The last thing that comes to mind is that no one ever got wet. You'd never see panties getting damp or fluids dripping down a leg. Seeing arousal fluids would go a long way, not to mention blood for characters that are virgins.