An enjoyable story thus far, still clearly in its early stages but the well-done writing shows a lot of promise. The characters feel distinct, grounded, and have some interesting stories brewing. The writing is engaging too, and keeps my attention. The fact that I can't decide on a favourite character is for sure a point in its favour.
If I were to critique one thing, it's that it's mostly a silent experience; music would add a lot to the atmosphere. Again, still early on though. I'm looking forward to updated sprites for all the cast too.