Ok bro tôi đã chơi lại game và lấy được kết thứ 3, lần này tôi chơi bản Eng nên phát hiện một số chỗ bị sai lỗi chính tả (như đoạn thằng bé khóc do mất bóng bay thì nó kêu "Ballon", hay đoạn bà mẹ bảo bà mắc bệnh khi nam chính đang học năm 2 "Since you were study so hard to graduate").
Cũng có vài cái nữa mà tôi quên ghi vào trong bình luận trước là thoại của nam chính cũng nên được để trong ngoặc kép luôn, và hay hơn nữa thì từng lời thoại của nhân vật có màu khác nhau để dễ phân biệt (ví dụ như nam chính thoại màu trắng, em gái thoại màu cam như màu áo, ba nam chính thì thoại màu xám đen, mẹ nam chính thì thoại màu xanh dương như áo, con ma thì thoại màu đỏ là chuẩn). Với lại thì cách người chơi di chuyển cũng có thể nên cân nhắc sửa lại, kiểu trong game unity hay bị cái là nếu nhấn giữ phím W với A hay W với D cùng lúc thì sẽ tăng tốc độ di chuyển như kiểu Bhop trong Counter Strike, cái này ko sửa cũng ko sao.
Tôi nghĩ là nếu có thể thì ông nên thử đăng game này lên một số nhóm trên facebook hoặc vào discord của các youtuber để đăng game vào phần đề xuất của họ nhằm quảng bá sản phẩm của mình.
Game rất nhân văn bro (cơ mà ko đuổi theo em goth girl đc nên -1 sao:))). Game này chỉnh chu hơn hẳn bản demo của mấy năm trước, thời lượng tương đối ngắn và gameplay cũng khác (từ nấu mì chuyển sang bẻ khóa máy tính), phong cách đồ họa giống của Chilla's art, phần âm thanh và xây dựng không khí ổn, song model và texture các nhân vật chưa nhất quán lắm (tôi nghĩ model ông già bán phá khóa là đồ store asset, model nam chính, em gái các thứ thì đồ nhà làm, mà tôi nghĩ cho model em gái cao gần bằng nam chính sẽ ok hơn).
Về phần gameplay thì tôi ko hiểu sao nam chính phải cầm máy quay ghi lại cảnh mình về nhà, có thể hiểu đó là cách để chèn filter VHS vào, nhưng có thể sẽ hay hơn nếu ban đầu nam chính lục lại đống đồ cũ và tìm được cái máy quay đó, khi mở máy quay ra xem thì người chơi vào vai nam chính sống lại ký ức quá khứ được quay lại trong máy. Ở mặt khác thì cái filter VHS đôi khi làm mờ các ký hiệu tương tác đồ vật, mất gần 3 phút tôi mới thấy chỗ tương tác thẻ thang máy lmao, trong quá trình chơi thì có đoạn đi ra ngoài mà tôi ko nhặt cái bật lửa được, ko biết nó có được sử dụng để làm gì ko.
Tôi nghĩ là với một game đầu tay như thế này thì là rất tốt rồi, nhưng nếu ông định tiếp tục phát triển thêm các game kiểu này thành series, thì cá nhân tôi khuyên chân thành là trend làm game mang đồ họa kiểu Chilla's Art hay Puppet Combo (dạng đồ họa low poly, pixelated, VHS filter, play station..v..v..), với gameplay là quản lý trạm xăng, cửa hàng tiện lợi, buôn bán hàng quán hay thậm chí kiểu game thuần kể chuyện kinh dị trên mạng như Fears To Fathom..v..v.. Trong mấy năm gần đây đang thoái trào hoặc ko nổi như trước nữa, có thì cũng chỉ phổ biến trong giới phát triển và chơi game indie thôi. Đã có rất rất nhiều nhà phát triển game indie kinh dị trên itch.io bắt chước Puppet Combo hay Chilla's Art nhưng ít thấy ai "tái chế" được cái công thức làm game của họ mà thành công lâu dài cả, đa số vẫn quen lói mòn là làm game kinh dị kinh phí thấp rồi chờ streamer chơi để nổi tiếng, kể cả game Quán Phở Của Anh Hai cũng chỉ hot được 1-2 tháng rồi đâu lại vào đấy, nó vẫn là dạng game kinh dị ăn liền với các yếu tố hài hước về văn hóa Việt Nam, chứ kinh dị thật thì còn xa. Chung quy lại thì tôi ko có quyền yêu cầu ông nên làm một con game như nào, tôi chỉ muốn cung cấp một số điều mà tôi quan sát được về các dòng game này để ông có thể cân nhắc mà vẽ ra hành trình phát triển game tiềm năng hơn, chúc ông may mắn với các sản phẩm về sau!
Btw forgot that checking the credits in game causes some image to not load properly (you can see a glimpse of it at the end of the video), first bug ever reported I guess.
I'd say the story and dialogues are not the best in the current state of this submission, but I sure enjoy the art and light puzzle gameplay of it, hope this get more attention after the jam!
This is a very good game! From the animated menu, dreamy animations, splendid arts to the soundtracks, character dialogues and endings, think I missed a few stuff like lighting up the canister or finding the bag for the lady but that's ok. It's been awhile since I've played a nice and neatly packed game like this on the site (for free too which is too good), if there's any complaint, I'm only bothered by the fact that the character chibi sprites are pixelated and not hand drawn like the rest of the game, other than that it's a fun ride. Hope more people check out this hidden gem!
Got a lot of Lacey's Wardrobe vibe from this, I also find it funny that the display mirror (or whatever it is behind Marion) gives her panda ears or a big ribbon. Sweet short game! Wish you the best of luck with the game jam!
Good game! Besides the typos, saving bugs, artstyle changing from pixels to clean lines, rough sketches to fully colored cgs and just enough soundtracks (and the fifa clip logo appearing in some animation...), it's still a fun experience to learn about the player and her gf's past, the cgs are very pleasing to look at and the animations are a vibe. I can see you put a lot of effort into this so don't be discouraged of its current flaws, this is very decent for an itch game and is better than most of the stuffs people uploaded on here lol. Keep up the great work!
The art and story are fine but the endings aren't working properly? I only got 2 endings which are going home and getting mugged, I went into the game files and saw a cg of Mal0 jumpscare which I didn't see in any ending or route, on the other hand the game having no sound is pretty sad, but all and all it's ok for a short silly experience.
I remember seeing screenshots of this fanproject when you announced its development years ago and was excited! I'm not really into fighting games but always love Helltaker contents and want to see how fans would expand the ideas of the original game into comics or games. The experience with the current build of Hellversus has been cool so far, all the effects, animations and sprites are not only well-drawn but also close to the original artstyle of Helltaker by Vanripper, if only he'd break his rule of not playing a game until it's finished to check this out. Since this is a big and ambitious project, I think we may have a few more Vanripper's games until Hellversus is completed lol, but keep up the good work!
Been a fan of your art for some years and this is the first time I've played a game made by you! The art in this game is very good (and make me feel other things...), but the gameplay itself is not as enjoyable, instead of having to scavenge for food items all the time, I think making enemies dropping some money or food after battle will make the experience better overall, it's hard to explore in later parts of the game due to the lack of energy that is caused by the lack of supplies (like in the cabin part for example). I went into this game completely blind so the story has not caught up to me yet, but it's been fun so far, a lot more things can be improved like the default RPG maker assets (I'm sorry if they aren't but most of them just look like that to me ig). Keep it up!
You should probably consider marking it as nsfw since it does show tits lol, on the other hand maybe make a separate censored version so that people can play it on stream or YouTube, cuz imagine someone playing this game blind on their channel then get banned when getting to that scene lol. If this game gonna have heavy gore or sth like that in the future then make sure it's properly mentioned on the game page and at the start of the game.
This is cool, I like the artstyle (it can be better tho) and is somewhat interested in the story, but there should be a nsfw warning since there's a post-sex cg in the middle of the game 😭this dept is freaky as hell (I know it's been warned from the start but the warning should be more obvious I guess).
I almost skipped this one after seeing it was made in Unreal Engine lol (cuz of how many bad games on this site were developed using this game engine), I thought there was no way this RPG/Visual Novel-looking game has file size that big, but turned out many sections in the game are in first person, which a nice change of pace, I like how cozy the grocery store looks and also like the initial apartment that Cecil is in, the cutscene that happens on the terrace is pretty nice too. While I didn't find too much interest in the gameplay, the art and atmosphere are well done, almost trippy to some sort, and while the story is quite depressing, it sticks to what it set out to be - just telling story of some random demon guy's life, no goal, no solution, no guidance, no meaning, no light even, it sure is what it is. Hope more people discover this game!
Good demo! I didn't quite get the innuendos behind puzzles and the characters that Vale encounters at the start of this bizarre adventure after her death, but the art and atmosphere are great!
For anyone's wondering how to change weapons and items while playing on keyboard, press Q. This demo is pretty good, only complaints are movement is kinda slow, not much stamina for running, enemy's AI is dumb (just like with old psx games), you'll have to figure how to kill each specific enemy by your own, not much to say about game's environment and map since it's just a demo, I don't know anything about the tv show which is the inspiration of this game but mayhaps those who like old ww2 games and movies would like to try this out.
This is very good for just a "test game", I think you've done well! Also about time someone makes a game like SCP-294 vending machine but with male protagonist lol.
This is cool as hell! The gameplay was frustrating at first but not exactly that hard, though it could be the enemies not spawning in rng so you can learn the patterns, still I love the hand drawn arts and vibes of this so much (reminds me of Vanripper's games like Helltaker and Awaria). The bossfight section is definitely the best part, the story is simple too, can be fleshed out to be a longer game even. Wish you the best of luck with the game jam!
It was definitely an experience, I like almost everything about this game except for the driving section and that some models have shiny effect on them (I don't like Unity graphics much, but this is one of the few games that actually try to make some unique graphics), having played through this game in one sitting, I can tell there are a lot of inspiration from Cry of Fear, love every second of it lol, though the whole game seems shorter than CoF drastically, not saying it's bad cuz of that but I feel like each chapter could have more playtime to it, like the forest section or after getting axe, the main character needs some more scenes of his past too (like CoF lol). Overall it's decent for an indie horror game, wish more people would buy this game and give it a try. Keep up the great work!
It's always a pleasure to play your visual novel! Although this game is about mukbang content and I myself is barely interested in it, Amira's situation is a little too close to any content creator/streamer's struggles out there, sometimes you just try to do something to earn some money, express yourself and have fun, but then you end up being devoured by that very job which you didn't even actually like or take it that serious in the first place, Amira has sadly got lost in the sauce while she had a chance to pull out, or considered practicing safety measures. Great work as always!
You should add fullscreen option for future update, the video quality is not the best because I couldn't record it at base resolution. Anyhow thanks for the reply!
