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Hi Brodie, some feedback below.

The navigation on the title page is intuitive and moving through the pages is simple - a ‘Back’ button might be considered for improved navigation. The banner is also slightly out of frame and could be enlarged for accessibility. The ‘Start’ button on the story pages that trigger the text could be labelled differently, to indicate what it actually does.

The objects and text are consistent and it’s good to see some hand drawn graphic elements. Good luck with your assessment!

Tom 

Hi Jackson, some general feedback below.

To help contrast text and find a colour balance with objects I use a colour picker (like - https://www.w3schools.com/colors/colors_picker.asp). Also, finding a font that will work with your user persona in mind will also add to your project.

Easy to navigate and understand. I like hand drawn graphics for uniqueness. Good luck!

Tom