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Love the idea, cool textures! I would probably bring the harpischord sounding thing out, and lower the background material a little to achieve a better balance, the rhythm also makes me a little uncomfortable? I am not sure if you quantized the rhythms or not, just something to play with!

Progression is really nice, some great layering in of sounds!

I would experiment with the volumes of the various layers, try and balance them out a little more so that the listeners ear knows what the most important thing is!

This is really really well crafted, interesting progression, beautiful layering of voices, and I think that you do a great job of balancing all of the voices and layers as they enter!

This is really really hip, I think this is perfect background music, and not chaotic at alll.

My only thought is maybe an additional instrument that is in the higher frequency range like halfway through to add a little melodic interest? Just something to play around with. Really great work!

Nice work! 

Need to get some work done on the chords, experiment with some different notes and see if you can make it sound even more interesting!

I think there are some pretty cool ideas here that if fleshed out could be really special.

Keep working hard!

Really nice work!

I would say as you layer things in, to lower the volume of other things. That way the sound always stays clear, and the listener always knows what should be drawing their ear at any moment!

Really love this track, great chord changes and groove, also love that acoustic guitar patch. 

My only thought would be, when the flute comes in at the B section, to maybe pull the backgrounds back a little? Its the first new thing we get in a minute, would be nice if it were the prominent idea!

This is really nice! Some nice textures, and chords!

I would consider adding a rhythm element or something halfway through to continue to maintain interest!

Nice work!

Yeah, this is super hip! Just a ethereal wash of really lovely harmonic and melodic motion! 

Sometimes I think the mix can muddy up a little bit, when it sounds like theres four or so things going on, so Id like to hear a little more clarity. But its a tiny little nit pick thing. This freaking bangs. 

The harmonies in this track are some of my favorite in the jam, really clever. 

Work on integrating some more countermelody, and adding some additional textures to add interest!

Really cool sounds, I think needs a percussive element to create a little more rhythmic interest, and sometimes the melody feels a little random, so it needs to feel a little more cohesive!

Really nice work!

I think I would bring the bass in a little earlier, or add a bass type instrument a little sooner just to thicken out the musical texture just a little bit, and when the bass comes in I would probably switch out the flute patch with something that is a little more articulate, so that the lines that are moving fast have a little more clarity!

Cool chords, cool ideas!

Some nice work! 

There is a lot of clashing with the drum rhythm tempo/piano rhythm tempo!

I would consider quantizing all of those elements so that everything lines up a little cleaner!

Really nice work, very heartwarming, and some nice sounds being used!

Watch the release of the oboe patch at the end of the melody phrases, its a bit sudden and jarring considering everything is so legato and smooth and pretty!

I would also experiment with notes in the duet section, there is some clashing between the two duet parts and also clashing with the chords, so just play around until you find notes that work both together, and with the chords!

Bravo!

Really nice work. 

There is something so like....Wes Anderson indie movie about this track, in the most heart warming innocent way. 

My only thing would be some of the trumpet melodic notes clash with the chordal stuff, so maybe experiment with finding notes that really jive well, and then when things start to get thick in terms of lots of different things going on, experiment with the mix so that the listeners ears aren't overwhelmed!

Nice work!

Nice work! 

Nice shift in texture toward the middle to keep things interesting!

I would experiment with textures/volume mixing. Sometimes it feels like there is a lot of things coming at you at once, and it would be helpful to know what exactly you want me to hear when! So bring out the most important stuff in the mix, lower or cut  unnecessary stuff!

Really really nice work, tight vibes!

When the hi hat-ish sound comes in, I would bring that up in the mix more, as it is the only contrast we have so far!

And any time you have a new element that contrasts what were already hearing, bring it up in the mix a little, it will go a long way to maintaining interest. 

Great work!!

Really nice work, love the Bossa Nova vibes, very reminiscent of Costa Del Sol/Girl from Ipanema.

I would balance the elements a little more, so bring that background guitar patch down a little so that the melody doesn't have to compete with it as much, same thing when the flute comes in, let that be the most prominent thing sonically. 

Bravo!

Really enjoy this! 

I think changing the textures/sounds with the sections would help make it even more interesting!

Love it! Great harmonic content, great energy! 

Would maybe experiment with a little more presence in the percussion sounds? 

This is super hip, particularly the second one, is this even BG music. 

Cool arrangement, nice change of textures at the sections. HIP.

Really nice work, love the flute melody! 

Vibe is ethereal, and sometimes haunting. 

I think when it comes in, the harp/piano/guitar sound I think clash a little bit rhythmically and harmonically, I would remove one of those elements to create a little more clarity!

Fixed!!

Thank you!!
 

Its fixed I think!!

Morning!

The way I am interpreting it is that the intention is that we write new music every day, and then at the end pick the songs we like the best to be in our personal album! I think its more about generating a lot of content, and then editing our preferred content?

Really nice, particularly Against all Odds and a New adventure! Well crafted stuff!

Some really  nice moments! From section to section, I would consider switching what instrument has the lead lines, it will help create some variation! 

Well done!

Nice work! I particularly enjoyed the last two tracks! Really beautiful writing, really beautiful vibes!

Nice work, particularly with the synth stuff! Very spooky, very effective!

Great vibes, very ambient, mix felt really nice too! Bravo!

Nice work! I enjoyed the different textures, and I feel like things moved along really nicely! Bravo!

Super hip! Very indie folkish to me! I really enjoyed it!

Really nice work!! Their Freedom has REALLY cool moments! Bravo!

Nice work! Enjoyed the vibe, nailed it for sure!

Nice work, really pretty, really ambient

Nice work! Really pretty, and the melodies and chords interacted well together!

 I think that if you could find some ways to weave some countermelodies or some other sounds it would help really keep the momentum moving forward, even on a chill track like this. 

Great work!

Really nice work! Loved the vibes, pacing was solid, and great sound choice! Bravo!

Really nice work! It was hip, and a total vibe! 

Nice! I really like how that developed! It is super cohesive, some cool sound design choices, awesome!