First of all, I loved the graphics. Game has a really cool look.
I know other people have said this already, but I can't get past the first puzzle. As a player who is new to the game, I can only tell you my own experience. I had no idea how to progress; there was a room with holes in the floor and three walkways going across it, and another room with a bookshelf and a table thing. The table thing displays an X, so I assumed that means it's missing something, or it's a button that can't be pressed yet? I tried clicking on it, but got nothing so I assumed it was missing something. Tried interacting with the bookshelf, but that also didn't do anything. I then went to the adjacent room (the one with the holes in the floor) and attempted to cross, but just fell through the floor over and over again. For whatever reason, I made it across the first 2 planks once or twice, but I couldn't tell why. I tried going the same route again, but fell through the floor on the second try. I tried jumping, but there didn't seem to be a jump. Tried crossing the planks in different combinations, tried going over them looking in different directions.
Hopefully all that info is useful. I really liked the look and atmosphere. Honestly, my only complaint with the game is that the first puzzle is a bit too obtuse. Keep making games! I think you have talent.