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This comment made my day. Thank you! A comparison to Rory Hayes and Savage Pencil is a dream come true.

This is incredible feedback, thank you!

This is the effect I hoped to have. Thank you.

Thanks for your kind words about the map! It was my favourite part to make!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Definitely valid feedback on the layout. 

Some of my favourite design in the jam so far just for how clean it is. Trifold is also a nice choice. So nice, so clean. Love the tone, and the characters. Well done!

Love the flavour in this one. Also just the design elements (font, colour choice) in general appealed to me. Great, compelling writing. I love fairy tale adventures. The Bonegrinder Elves make a great faction. Really amazing stuff. 

I very much love this one. Great concept. Love a strange mysterious object. And the fact it is a slow burn. Not so much pick up and play, as slot into existing campaign. Really excellent work.

Nice job packing those room descriptions! A lot of gameable info in sight space. Fun heist module!

Really enjoyed this read. Great lore, interesting location and culture. Also a solid adventure! 

Imaginative and great characterization on the different clans. Told a complex story in a short amount of space. I would like to see this fleshed out and with more art, but then we would likely be over the page count 😅

Thanks for the feedback and for such kind words. Definitely some improvements to be made on the information side of things but so happy to get nice feedback about the art.

thank you so much! The suggestion makes a lot of sense. A lot of inspiring modules (including yours) in this jam that are showing me how it can be done.

Very much enjoyed the humour in this one. Clever use of dream logic to solve problems. Art is sparse but works very well to convey the tone. Love the characterisation of all of the various guys. So fun!

Cover and map are both beautiful. Make sure the text is legible throughout and you're on to a winner. Very creative puzzles, simple to understand, and fun to play with. A few of the rooms had interesting characters that attack on sight. Would love to see more opportunities for a diversity of interactions. All in all, incredible work.

Really nice, tonally. The art choices really sold the concept and the writing is solid. Looking forward to running this one!

You are too kind! Thank you. 

The art is so interesting. I love it. Rough and evocative. It feels like it should  be rotoscoped animation. The concept itself is great. I've always loved the idea of death not being the end in adventures.  Excellent stuff. 

Love the timeline structure. It makes great use of the smaller page count and keeps things interesting. This is incredibly inspiring to read, and really gets to that pulp fantasy tone so perfectly. Incredible work, worthy of the author that inspired it. 

This is such high praise. Thank you!

Thank you muchly!

Hey! Looks like the discord link has expired! I already submitted, but I would still like to join if it's possible.