Hey Fuze, love your art btw. So for the ending I wish I had more time to flush it out, but ultimately with such an ambitious project I knew I had to keep it a little rushed and short to get everything done in time (we literally uploaded our VN 11 minutes before the deadline lol). There were a few ideas here and there to change it up, at one point I even pondered Nate being the one in the duel at the end, or character choices deciding who is at the duel at the end, but unfortunately those ideas would have taken a bit more time we didn't have. Hate to leave some loose ends or situations (like Nate's guilt and him making it up to Javi) to reader speculation but we were just short on time. Still appreciate your comments and critique and I'll keep that stuff in mind for any future stories.
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As the age of the Wild West comes to an end, a young outlaw must make a choice between freedom or the man he loves.
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Thank you for taking the time to read through our VN! Glad you enjoyed it! I will definitely be updating the text box in the next update to make the text easier to read.
I did have a montage like scene in mind showcasing more of Javi and Nate's relationship but some of those ideas had to be cut back due to time. Not opposed to bringing those scenes back for the future when we have more time!
Thanks for your feedback!

