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Short but powerful—this one's going to stick with me for a while.. I really enjoyed the use of parallel structure, the way you layered colors for both speakers, the use of the whole screen to display text, and the illustrations.

This was such a fun concept! I found it really difficult, but I'm not great with rhythm games to start with. Would be really excited to see a more developed version of this if you're planning on taking it beyond the prototype phase.

thank you so much for playing and for leaving a comment! especially glad to hear that the story holds up over multiple read-throughs!!

wow, I'm really glad our hard work shone through clearly! thank you so much for your kind and thorough comment, and thank you for playing!

yay! I'm so glad you loved it!!! I'm so glad you love her!!!!! thank you for playing!

thank you so much for your detailed feedback—it makes me really happy to hear that the story and characters engaged you enough that you played through all the routes!

thank you so much! it means a lot that you found it so compelling, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it overall—thank you for playing and commenting!

what a lovely comment to wake up to! I'm so glad you enjoyed everything, and very much agree that the character designs and sprites + backgrounds were so incredible—I will sing the artists' praises for the rest of time. thank you so, so much for playing and especially for commenting!

The end hit me like a car—that was great. The part directly after the hammer made me burst out laughing, and the whole epilogue made me immediately want to go back and read through again with that context.

I've been so excited to play this as you've been posting the art and UI to the Discord server, and I'm glad I'm able to now! The art is so beautiful and I really like the card interface in particular. I just finished Act I and look forward to continuing it—well done :)

your writing of claire is so so so masterful. thank you for this—i have a feeling it's going to stick with me for a long, long time.