Looks amazing! Good job.
TheDreadist
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Thank you for the reply and the opportunity. I have compiled a list of typos in the first day of the game and currectly am working on the second day. I made a list of them in a private Google Docs page but I'm not sure if I should post the link publicly. Please, tell me how I could send it to you or if you are alright with me posting it here. Thank you in advance!
Thank you for the fast reply and the opportunity. As I mentioned I think that the demo is showing a promising beginning of a future game. Though it is still early in development, the main concept is interesting. It is functional and has the potential to be extended with new functions and content. I like the idea of indie games and I would like to ask if there is a way how I could help. I lack a significant audience so I can not promote it but I would like to offer my support.
I am a novice writer so maybe I could provide reviews or feedback. I have noticed a few occasional typos and oddly structured sentences in the demo. I would gladly gather a list of them or write bug reports. If more complex game features will get implemented, I could do testing to search for bugs. Of course, this is your game and as such, I do not want to interfere with your idea but if you would like, I would very happily give you ideas or show options of how something could be worded. Then you could decide if you will consider them or ignore them based on what you like and think fits into the image that you planned regarding the full game.