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TheBunyip

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This a lovely, eerie adventure and I really love it!

I noticed quite a few typos and grammatical errors though, and it hurts my heart because the story and your turn of phrase is wonderful. In case you intend to update the file again, here are the ones I spotted:

  • "One of themt, of course..." (pg. 1) should be "them" 
  • "You boss feel this" (pg. 1) should be "Your boss feels this"
  • "and taken tothe dark" (pg. 2) should be "to the"
  • "a strange and misteryous" (pg. 2) should be "mysterious"
  • "Confusion and half-thuths" (pg. 2) should be "half-truths"
  • "go with flow" (pg. 3) should be "go with the flow"
  • "at what moment of the game session you will encounter it." (pg. 3)
  • "Obtain guns before heading out on their mission they will" (pg. 6) doesn't scan - maybe "Obtaining..."?
  • "but the death of his daughter, Sarah gave him" (pg. 6) would read better with an extra comma ("but the death of his daughter, Sarah, gave him") or neither comma ("but the death of his daughter Sarah gave him")
  • "“A bump in road" (pg. 7) should be "“A bump in the road"
  • "sit in a victorian chair in the beach" (pg. 7) should be "sat in a Victorian chair on the beach"
  • "something about the the person presence" (pg. 7) should be "something about the person's presence"
  • "she saw at the newspaper" should be "she saw in the newspaper"
  • "parents must being latin Hispanic" should be "parents must be Latin Hispanic"
  • "looks like it had survived a flood" (pg. 9) should be "looks like it has survived a flood"
  • "somewhere nearby, a dor barks" should be "somewhere nearby, a dog barks"
  • "afterall is rain season" should be "after all it is rain season"
  • "and The investigators are all expected" should be "and the investigators are all expected"
  • "butthey may never" should be "but they may never"
  • "rude folks runkenly yelling" should be ""rude folks drunkenly yelling"

(Actually, this got time-consuming! If you are willing to share an editable document I could edit in-place more quickly than typing this all out.)

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Great stuff! I would never have thought of using a Trilemma adventure for Agents of the ODD and I have a convention one-shot coming up, into which one of these will fit perfectly! Thanks. :)

Hey Pete! I just got an email from Itch about this. Long time no speak! Ben

Your last point might be true (I have no way to verify either way, but I have seen a lot of paths and roads that follow a waterway for extended periods - I expect it was just easier to build a road on the flat near a lazy river, and they would then part ways at some point). However, in the case where a river makes building a road unnecessary, wouldn't you expect the river to connect up settlements?

Oh and one more thing... can it generate plateaus?

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I have one question/suggestion...

Am I correct in thinking that the rivers cannot follow roads? I have a campaign with a town in it where a road through the town follows the river, and it looks like your generation algorithm can't ever produce this situation (at least, I tried a lot of times and never saw it happen). If it can't do this, it would be a cool feature, to add some extra verisimilitude I think - paths and roads often build up this way in real life. 

This tool is stunning.

Cool. Thanks for the info. What attracted you to Godot over something like Unity?

What language/editor/tools did you use to make this?

Love it!

Thanks.

Hi.  The rules for character death seem very punitive. If I get hit with a sword at first level (and have 1 Armour, say), I will take 3 Wounds and immediately have a 50-50 chance of dying.  Is that right?

Thanks for this!