oih my gosh, that was so so amazingly good, so well-written, fun and bittersweet. I hope we can have a chance to get revenge on our sister and ex-fiance. I wish you the best for writing and have a great time with it <3 I'm looking forward to more <3
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what a sad, bitter and still so beautiful start in your story. I'm glad the ancient found and rescued us, no one should ever do this to a child. (nor to other living beings.) i'm happy my MC trusted Havard and it was so sweet to 'see' them hugging each other :D I'm looking forward to read more and meet the other characters <3
oh and I found a writing mistake, it should be coughing, not couching (if you mean the 'cough, cough' sound when we try to talk to Havard C: )
I like the start and it's really good (I dislike our sister very much :O) :D the only problem I have is that I'm in a loop (maybe?) when Mister Everett stops us and talks about his nephew/niece/nibling and when I click continue it loops me back to the same scene lol
I'm looking forward to read more and I hope MC will have more luck soon xD