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Perhaps you could ask around on the MB discord. People there are typically helpful.

Has there been an update yet or plans to follow through  on making a spreads version? If you make a spreads version i'm easily giving this thing a 5 star review but otherwise think i'd give it a 4 or 3.5

Love it! It is very addicting. There are some criticisms I have though.

1. Make it so you cant have a starter room be entirely locked off. That's way too common.
2. Some way to know if a nearby room is a hellvent and make it so starting rooms cant be hellvent rooms. Instantly dying through no fault of your own except for the fact you haven't obtained an item that has a fairly likely chance to not even appear in your run.
3. Nerf the dusk troll. Why can it do all of these things? 1.Duplicate more of themselves. 2.Crit you and instantly kill you no matter what amount of health you have. 3. Follow you to other rooms. 4. Deal naturally high levels of damage. Please remove 2 of these things. Having all of them seems a bit much.
4. Why does the arch cultist always insta kill? Is that intended? Ive never survived an attack and it has never listed damage. I also have the feeling its not even the final boss.
5. Add a chance to actually find items when searching a room i'm pretty sure all it ever does is spawn monsters, traps and secret doors. It feels like the only reason to search is when you need a secret door or want to kill monsters to level up.
6. Make it so wickheads don't get an auto attack if you spawn in a room with them.
7. Give us info on what all the afflictions do its not listed anywhere I can find. I know what nudist and illiterate do but not anything else.
8. There is a glitch where if you pick up a grappling hook after already having one (Now owning two) and then drop one of them it then makes the game act like you don't have one at all.

Also I have a question is the backup mandate meant to always say "documents sealed by that great and dismal deity guaranteeing passage on the wings of the great Two- Headed Basilisk. Passage from the Dying World to the Undying Hereafter. Seems to be a copy of the one you were already holding. Can never have to many I suppose!" even when you only have ever had one. Is this a glitch or is it meant to be a function-less item?

I'm aware of that as a solution but I use a different reader for PDFs. Otherwise it takes nearly 8 minutes to load the heap of maggots among other things taking really long. Its still also not anywhere nearly as easy on the eyes as an actual spreads version would be.

Is there any way you can make a spreads version of it? I would appreciate it very much as it would significantly help with readability for me. Its very much a struggle otherwise to read the digital version sadly...

Easily my favorite non MBC creation made by a single creator.

Do keep in mind it is meant to be a 5 page format. I think that you should SPOILER WARNING










Include 4 pages worth of stuff for DM giving advice on what to say and how to say it and some pre written stuff aswell. Stuff like "Please jump in the hole its how you will survive the trials ahead in the dungeon! Pleaseee i've been a very good boy patiently waiting so I can advise adventurers just like you as ive been asked by my owner" and add for them to describe how they start to do puppy dog eyes and whimper until eventually they become more angry deliberately mean. Have the dog call them foul things and insist that they are what they call the PCs because they want him to be punished for being a bad boy when their owner gets back.
Make it clear in the beginning that PCs are not allowed to describe what happens to them when they jump in unless they could reasonably do so. Like if they fell to the last floor and crawled their way up or if they made a strong enough strength check to yell loud enough while falling infinitely and give a presence check for the people who haven't jumped yet to hear it.
Include notes for how the dog will react based on what happens when they jump in and what the salvation entails.(maybe salvation is something like they pop out into medieval Europe or the beginning of skyrim. Maybe the dog will say that he's so sorry and that the switch needed to be flipped the other way when they jumped down if a person crawls back to the room. Maybe make the dog say "Shit" and then attack them if the hole is really shallow.

This is cruel torture. Players will be stuck here for hours looking for the solution.