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I just finished chapter 1 and I am just as hooked as I was in the first book. I've missed my mc and Carter's snarky banter (and we love Kate in this house)

I also wanted to bring up that when I had chosen "Are you?", this error had popped up

Dude the entire time to my mc I was like "PLEASE REMEMBER WILHELM PUHLEAASE" (can you tell hes my favorite)? And the end of chapter 5 made my jaw drop, totally unexpected and yet I loved every bit of it.

Also there were two major(ish) scenes where there were some coding errors, one was during the memory scene, it kept saying $W_Son, $W_Nephew, $_Boy, mostly at the beginning. 

Also at the spill scene towards the end of the chapter it says $E_heshe or $E_himher

I love this game with a passion and I can't wait for chapter 6 (and more Wilhelm)

I absolutely adore this IF sm, the writing is PEAK and I love Sonia and Callen's friendship

 
I did notice a coding error however on turn 280 when MC and Callen are going through crowds

The first option shows the second ones scene and the second shows the first ones scene

THE CLIFFHANGER OH MY GOODY GOD dude your writing is so impeccable im gnawing at the bars of my enclosure 

I love this game so far! The premise is amazing and im already so hooked on the story.

However, I did come across a few pronoun errors(?) in turns 60 (When Kyliah was speaking to Axis), 66 (when the street magician speaks to mc), 75 (when the maid apologizes to mc), and 77 (when the guard was talking about mc to Remus). I had chosen he/him for my mc's pronouns and occasionally instead of 'he' it'll be 'she' while talking about mc