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The_Criator
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Oof that's some hard feedback to read. This is my first time writing and sharing a story so I guess some rough edges are to be expected. The next update will include more insight into Nicolai's past and his motivations which hopefully elevate him above "edgelord" status. There is also a refinment of the earlier scenes such as between Nolan and Souldro in the hallway to better portray Nolan's inner turmoil.
Thanks for the review, it's a shame the story didn't resonate with you.
Look, the vn is about a heavy theme, mental health, and other things. Even if I find myself very horny, I dont know if there will be space for a nsfw. Im not saying that cant have one, Im just saying that I dont think there will be space for it. But we will only know if there be nsfw if I keep going writing.