I just finished the game for the first time, I have to say: It's an absolute gem
I didn't know what to expect from a pokemon VN, specially one centered around a honestly bland character, but man... you blew it out of the park with this one!
I honestly forgot the game even had NSFW until I got to that part, the chemistry the MC and Marnie have is so cute too!
Overall, a really great piece of media, and it's given me some ideas for a project, maybe not a VN, but something that I wish oozes of passion for it just like this does!