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I am still working through it, but I am really liking this so far. It's keeping a strong mix of cyberpunk+urban fantasy fiction while keeping the same kind of "screwed up people just trying to get by" through line that 'Distortian Nation' and 'Pillow Talk' have. I can easily see this becoming my favorite work of yours. 

Got 30 years, I really enjoyed this one. Kind of distilled "dungeon diving for loot" to its barest essentials.

Yeah. I never wrote an ending where the dad kills you, but there is one ending where you metaphorically kill yourself.

Thank you, also nice suletta pfp.

You keep writing this off as a shit post, but frankly this cares much more about whats happening in our world than "real" art.

FR thank you so much for this. I'm sorry for what you've also gone through, but I am glad that I was able to capture the experience and you could relate to it. That was the goal in mind with the story.

And yeah, Dyketamine really killed it with the music.

Thank you, and will check out the video. Also Vivid and I hope to get the final game out soon™.

Lira read to me as like, the girl who folds easily if you feed her even if she hates what she becomes. But will quickly bite when someone offers more food.

Mall Santa CEO. What will he do?

*patty voice* Could you not swear so loudly.! Its making river upset.
*river dissociating*.

Ooh sick.

Bro is it normal to see each other as the only humans in this place, touching each others heads, kneeling before god.

Yes bro, let the light of divinity shine into you.

Good job btw, look forward to more.

Thank you!

I really love the ways Amy is isolated intertwine. Being queer, being Asian, and being a VN Dev all fold into one neat package ontop of only ever seeing Amy at the end. Her broad life experience, even if not the details, are both eternally relatable, but also she's cut off from us. Extremely well done.

Surprisingly, Yes. I am doing much better.

Thank you for asking Poopmancer.

In contact---now!

Thank you. And I am glad you have been able to survive such difficulties.

I am sorry to hear that you are in this situation.

Thank you! It might be a little weird to say "I am glad you found it gut-wrenching" but I am glad you found it gut wrenching.

Gorgeous. 

That was very cute! Glad to see you're making more of this series.

Thank you!

Gorgeous.

This was very cute! Love freeing a robogirlfriend from the shackles of corporate control.

Really enjoy how you played with the limitations and implemented a simple faux gui at the end.

Good game!

Wonderful. I am glad to see you returning to visual novels and writing.

Unfortunately not yet. Since Vivid and I don't really have any other projects ongoing hopefully this year though but I said that the last few years.

However, thank you for your kind words!

Art mirrors life... even when you're not intending it to (?).

I am bread.

Almost all of us do. I forgot I had included that detail so your comment was a good reminder I had wrote that bit.

That ending was something--wow. I'm going to have to think about this--thank you for making this.

Ah thank you! It is a very cute last line.

Ooh, another video? Thank you as well!

It took me a while before I got around to really gay up my room. Definitely took Maria's experience from my own.

Oooh a video! Thank you for sharing it.

And I am glad you enjoyed the game!

Thank you! There is definitely a bit more to the two's past than whats talked about in the VN. 

On a lighter note, I do believe Renalda does find peace after the ending of this story, even if it isn't the peace she originally.

Thank you! And yeah the goal was for a straight out tragedy that neither of these characters wanted in their life.

pls

I love, love, love the use of repeated text to get past the word count and enforce the theme of repetition. Extremely clever and a very sad read.

What a nice fella--also good conversation! Is it weird that I mostly agree with the spliced together body horror monster.

Though one critique, music would help this a ton.