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In the Spells section you cite: Betty Bactontine. " Fragmentary Powers v2.0 - A Tarot Deck Generator for Janky Super-powers," Paper Elemental, June 17, 2021.
Alot of Blogspot blogs do not readily come up in Google and I was having a hard time finding it, so I wanted to leave this link here for others in the future:
https://paperelemental.blogspot.com/2021/06/fragmentary-powers-v20-tarot-deck.ht...

This looks incredible. This also reminds me of The Invisibles by Grant Morrison. 
One small typo: In the explanation for Audacity under the Rolling the Dice section you spelled it "Vulgar magik" without a "c" but elsewhere it looks like you spelled "magick" with a "c."

The last sentence of the Special Trait section seems to end prematurely: "It doesn't have to be particularly useful or noteworthy, just different enough from the baseline Big Unit that"

Thank you for this feedback. You're right, there are sections that become walls of text. I'll have to see which sections naturally jump out to me for logical highlights and breakpoints.

Yep, this could be one good option!
The general concept of SCP Foundation and the Federal Bureau of Control were both definitely in my mind as inspirations. I wanted to add a twist that the Anomalies were energy sources like oil deposits. There's a tension between wanting to locate the Anomalies because they're dangerous and AEGIS needs to protect the world from them, but they also want to find them because they're desirable as significant sources of rare energy.
I want to keep expanding the lore and logic of this setting in future updates. Please let me know if you and your players are inspired by the idea and come up with any cool offshoot ideas in your sessions.

Good callout about the usage of 'you' in certain phrasings. I'll have to take another pass to tighten this up.

Thank you so much for this review!
(And I like the style of the four different aspects for review.)