The story is very intriguing and the world building is interesting. The first build really hooked me up.
Honestly, this is one of the examples of a good introductory build for a VN. Already affecting the reader and no boring parts. I am very excited for more.
Stygian is tickling something in my brain. I love and hate him at the same time lol.
Since this update is the ending of the main story, I want to give my honest review on it. The first part of it really got my heart pumping(I feel like my blood pressure shoot up). I commend the writing and the flow of story.
But the ending does not give me the feeling of conclusiveness. It feels like a cliff hanger to me. The problems of the characters were not addressed after the confrontation which is what I was waiting for for the ending (I honestly thought they died and went to paradise lol).
This is only a constructive criticism and I hope you won't take this in a bad way. I love the story and the characters (except Don Hernan) though i still haven't forgiven the mc. That's enough of me yapping.
Thank you so much for the story you made and I hope I can read more from you!
the latest chapter made me hate the MC. Ari you gotta fix this! Anywayyy~ DRAMAAAAA~
ps: sorry i just hate cheaters ಠ_ಠ
Pps: y'all might misinterpret my statement above. what i meant is they gotta fix this hate that i am feeling towards the MC. *eherm* redemption arc *eherm*
No sweat. I understand. I thought that your choice on Day 5(Kyrex) on every route will have an impact on the story since it had on Diego's route but right now while I am writing this, I realized implementing that will be so much hassle and I understand that you are not planning on applying that mechanics in the game instead adding new contents and I totally respect that (since people are excited for other routes including myself). But regardless I still enjoy the two finished routes so far. Stay healthy and don't push yourself too hard ^_^
I don't know if this has been asked beforehand but I am just curious. Are there any series of choices in Tai's route that may have led to whether the threesome will happen or not?
Hmm...weird. He is definitely selling one in my save. And I can't think of any other way of getting one except on doing the "Outside the Law" quest and having Rohan make one for you. You might need to start a new save and don't burn the forest.
I think you can buy a fishing rod from Myaun if you are locked out from getting it from "Outside the Law" quest (not sure tho haven't tested it but I bought one while I was doing the quest). As for the trout, you can get it by fishing at the river.
