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An adorable story about a gator and a wolf!
I found the story overall to be fun and enjoyable to read through. I liked learning bits of the world while the story slowly leads to the climax. If you ever expand/return to this world in the future, I would continue to read from it.^^
I don't have any criticisms as these game jams are meant to be short. The implementation of the theme from the jam is great.^^ Presentation and creativity is great as well.

I played through both paths. Without spoiling, I enjoyed the writing in both. Keep up the good work NeveN devs. ^w^

i can't wait for the next build. Good luck Xarishro.^^

Glad to hear from you. I hope your recovery goes well Xarishro.^^

The Burning Woof uses the theme of Expanding very well.
I found myself thinking about the theme as well as seeing it through the main character as he also tries to understand the theme.
Its creative, taking the whole burning man and using it as inspiration for this game jam story.
Great Work WackyWoof.^^
Sorry if this review/reflection for the game jam is short. I'm not good at writing my thoughts down.

Always great to read the next chapter of this VN. It kept me engaged in the story, especially at key moments. Keep up the good work GhostieSpectie.

Congrats. Keep up the good work GhostieSpectie. :)

I played through the latest chapter. It was fun seeing more plushies of other vns. x3 I assume its sorta going to be a thing with future chapters now. The presentation throughout is still great. don't wanna spoil anything so, Keep up the good work. :)

I took time to play this game today. I really liked some of the way you portray the flashbacks and other scenes with style. I don't have any criticisms as this is early in development. I wish you good luck on the future updates.

The latest Build 10 was awesome. The writing here is really amazing. It really adds to what happened in the last build. How the atmosphere and scene was presented in the past build. And the further context with this Build. I hope you take your time to make the next build. It was worth the wait; at least i think so.^^

(i don't know if editing ends up as a notification. Sorry if it does. I wanted to make sure to leave a good comment about my thoughts.)

I hope you are able to get good feedback.^^ Keep up the good work Sedge.^^

The presentation of the game is cool so far. I wish you good luck on the development. ^w^

Newest story build was cool to read.^^

The background art was great, i think it did well with the tone of story at that section.

I played this over a couple of days. I enjoyed the themes of the story and the writing. The artwork and art design is also great.^^ I can't wait for more and wish the team good luck on the development.^^