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The concept is good. I think the characters narration is gimmicky, and often unecessary, sometimes it would be more impactful if she didnt say anything, and some of the lines might work if rewritten a bit. I think gameplay could be improved. I played for about two hours and only changed once. I also think the amount of foods that is bugs is a little.... overdone. Lots of people in various places eat them . The comments the strangers make and how those change was interesting, i think with work, this could be a game that really says something, but i think some of the dialouge, especially the sillier "does this taste like penguins" type stuff really takes away from it. And some way to improve the gameplay like maybe typing in a number as an option instead of just dragging coins as an option. the dragging coins was fun at first but it got tiresome.