A sad story, as befitting Romeo and Juliet. I think a lot of writers have issues making comm chatter and machine text look awkward or hard to read, but you do a great job avoiding the issues they usually run into. You very much get the point of the theme across without being on the nose. Great story!
Solid development of characters considering the limitations of the format. Some pretty solid descriptions and good characterization. Awesome story you have here!
Very well done! Love the pacing on this one, fits the mold of a one-page story nicely. A lot of really great descriptions as well. Overall, fantastic work!
A solid use of the format to make something really unique. The pacing on this one is incredibly well done, especially for an action-heavy first-person POV like this one. All around great work!
It's always amazing how one tweak of a character can make them instantly memorable. Even better when it's employed well, which it's done here. This is a fantastic take on the Last Stand and a very powerful story. Amazing work.
Really stand-out formatting that immediately sets it apart. I also love a moody opener and closer that circles back to the start. A delightfully moody, noir-esque atmosphere on this one, it's very much the type of story you want to read on a gloomy day. Fantastic work!
Right away the formatting makes this one stand out. Read a few stories in the Jam based on the Robots and each one stands out in its own unique way. Really crazy how creative you guys are, and this one's no different. Strong descriptions, good flow, just an all around fantastic story!
Decisively brutal and the first Sisters story I think I've read for the jam. I love how ruthless some of the descriptions are, especially when it comes to the action. Fantastic work!
Heavy read with a melancholy ending, but that's just the way we like it in the grimdark. Some really strong descriptions in this. All around, very solid work!
Nice, another first-person POV, it's always a gamble writing in that POV, but that start grabbed me right away! A lot of solid descriptions here, even though I think dialogue might need another pass. Still excellent work all around!
Ah, the staple of the grimdark setting: The Last Stand. You pull it off spectacularly well, throwing us right into the action, got slightly lost a couple of times, but I think that adds a level to the chaotic nature of the action. And with that punch of an ending, just fantastic all around!
I appreciate the reflective nature of this one, very calm compared to some of the other stories I've worked through. These smaller stories are the most fun to explore in a grim dark setting, I find, and I think you do wonders in this one. Great work!
Fantastic personality through the dialogue on this one. It's a bold gamble to have so many characters in a one-pager, but I think you run with it really well!
This one's heartbreaking, putting the grim in grimdark. Beautifully brutal work, with some amazing descriptions and a gut punch of an opener and closer. Great job!
How can this be the first Orc-focused story I've read in the jam so far? Thank Gork (or is it Mork?) it's such a fun one! Really love the formatting on this one as well. Gives it a very unique voice. Great work!
A strong opening with a lot of great prose and a story that leaves you with a lot of questions begging to be answered. A fantastic use of the single-page format overall. Excellent work!
An introspective on the Scourge? It's a very bold choice that I think you pull off really well! A lot of mood in this story with a very punchy ending. Great work!
Definitely feels like the beginning of a longer story, which has been a little bit of a trend (don't worry, I ran into the same issue hahaha). Also, a clever play on the impossible with the classic "rat in the maze" plot. There's something very relaxing about the story overall, very chill, which I appreciate. Great work!
Powerful atmosphere in this one carried by some fantastic descriptions. Pretty bold to take on a possible Ratmen origins but I think you make it work really well. Amazing work!
