Pretty decent game, some parts are redundant though which kind of kills it. I also didnt care for Rachel, hindered my motivation to finish the game as I had to focus on her for Debbie and the teacher to progress - just gave up.
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Havent played, downloading but I would say your tile art (the box that comes up during search, Idk what its called) needs to be updated to bring eye attention to it. Its dark and I almost didnt click on it myself since it gave a sci-fi vibe and Im not really into that stuff.
*Ok, I got to week 1 and I cannot get my bike after running into the camera guy. Im just sitting on the map, clicking places and seeing women but unable to interact with any of them. There is also a lot of broken English and some lines dont have a good "flow" to them. This seems like a really rough draft of a game.
Insanely short atm, has a solid story line but the last bit kind of had me "meh". Model/art is probably the best Ive ever seen tho. I did a 2nd play through and it seemed if you answer wrongly then you just get a few options/scenes removed but didnt really add much imo.
Would of liked to see more of the existing characters lore open up rather than have a whole section of the club storyline but maybe itll play a bigger role later. Sophie, Livia, and Kate are the only ones I was interested in - didnt see any action/major developements from them.
Whoa, all I can say is.. what the fuck. The level of crazy packed into this VN is.. astonishing.
Story is a bit choppy at times though. I dont understand some dynamics of the roommate but the dialog wasnt too bad. I can say, if you are ever questing your morality - this VN is a good check. Wish there were better animations for some scenes but that would be a lot of work this far along.
I will say the models are extremely good - I like the older women having certain features that would be normal for their age. Also, I think the warning of Toxic Behavior is... putting it lightly. This game has a lot of morally questionable kinks, thankfully a lot of them are optional so you can still see what the VN is about.
*SPOILER* Abby is extremely questionable. Many times during a Raptus feature she betrayed the MC so it left me a bit suspicious of her. Grandma could also be.. suspect. I think Martha is just messed up and Helen... well I guess from the MC pov I dont trust any of them except the Martha for some reason.
Im going to keep pushing through but fuck - these girls are straight trash. Im straight slapping the shit out of them then reloading. Just got to Fiona, throws a punch after being rude and running through me the previous day? So I gotta chill but everybody gets to be verbally abusive/violent - did I miss the femdom tag? The humilation tag? Simp tag? The fuck.
MC aint even that bad of a dude, losing your LIFE GOAL due to an injury has to be the absolute worst feeling. Pouring yourself into it just to have it ripped away. Then to have some Dean toy with your 2nd chance by giving you an invitation/hope only to change up on you.. so the MC just gets shit on from the jump by the Dean and everyone else EXCEPT the other coach.
*Now Ive finished the current content, gotta say Saki, Desiree and Lexi were better. Only thing I would knock is Desiree DEI talking points - she was fine and didnt require it - also giving her the "stupid southern" accent was a bit racist of the dev imo so not sure wtf they were going for in their message. It was extremely distracting from an almost perfect character - she would of been the main favorite but Id probably give it to Lexi even if she just a basic flesh light.
If you are thinking of trying this VN, anytime you are given an option - save. Its basically a No option thing, there is only one right answer from what Ive seen so far (ch. 1). Story is ok, your standard injured/troubled sport big shot mingled with a unrealistic rumor hanging over the sport club in question.
Ok, just finished this game. I hate a lot of VNs but this was one of the fews I enjoyed and didnt mass click LMB. Its nice to not see your typical storyline and the people are all unique. I also like Ed - a strong male character that seems like a dumbass but could possibly be more.
I dont mind the futa - I thought it was a wild surprise but I guess some got upset. Personally, I found no issue with it - the game is titled Freaks for a reason. All the girls are still open season for me - I usually only like 2-3 but so far Im interested in them all still.
I think you have a awesome foundation and hope to see more updates then the polish. Thank you!