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I noticed you have the location name in the bottom left corner, but I wish it was a little bigger. There are times when the player may not notice it.

Maybe you could move the text up a bit more, although there is a text scrolling feature, it gives the player a better experience if the text is centered. Also, I'd like to say that the music is well chosen, I really like the soundtrack.

Very short game, but I noticed that the scenes are in 3D. I'm guessing you created a 3D scene and then set up a fixed camera to make this 2.5D game.

The soundtrack is in stereo, which is great for my ears. Also I noticed the dynamic time box and I am very interested in implementing this feature.

Very relevant subject matter, maybe you could add some pictures. Make the whole game more immersive.

It reminds me of several games I played before in class. But I really like how you made these texts in different colors. This help you to show important information to players.

incredible game! Story is long enough and help me have a great five minutes. I wanna know how did you make that little fading effect at the end.

Great game experience by seeing similar game art style and text. I can say sound, text and art combined together very well. Maybe the special event is a little bit hard to find.

Maybe there is a bug while I'm clicking the option "check Ticktok", it didn't have any response. Overall all, I get the good ending and bad ending and I'm guessing this game have  multiple endings.

I like how you design the background of the itch page. And I am wondering what main theme you want to express by making this game. I also made a game about cop and I am curious about your answer.

This game reminds me of the genre of galgame and the setting of speaking cat reminds me of the cat in Persona 5. The whole tone is relax and I really enjoy the game.

I suggest maybe you can add more techniques in the game like little dialogues. Besides, this is a traditional interactive novel and reminds me of split fiction at the start menu.

This game reminds me of the text style in Miside. While words pop out on the screen, you can walk around to see the text and make interactions.

This game used a special writing method for the player to create their own story. This is a very unique game since I didn't see any typing elements in games before.

Great sound in the background. Every options lead you to different scenes.  This makes the game very interactive.

I like how you made the little gun fire system. Also, I guess it is made time function? Maybe computer will have a time period to decide if the player wins.

this game needs the player to press space while the baby is crying.  However, maybe there is a technical problem here and I can't go into the next scene.

There are different texts shown when you get into a room several times which is great. Also, I can see clear map system in your game.

great story settings, and I am expecting to see more on this story. For now, the story is a little bit short and maybe you can add more.

really impressive game. I like how you make these typing effect on your text. Besides. everytime I made a choice, the scene will change, it really put me into the story.