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MUCHÍSIMAS gracias, de verdad 💛
Leer comentarios así me motiva más de lo que imaginas. Me alegra muchísimo saber que la historia y el ambiente te llegaron y que no se sintió como otro cliché más, eso era justo lo que quería evitar.

Gracias también por apoyar el proyecto de una forma tan sincera. Fanart, menciones, incluso solo hablar del juego ya significa muchísimo para mí. De verdad, gracias por tomarte el tiempo y el cariño!!!!!! Voy a seguir, lo prometo  ˚₊‧꒰ა❤︎໒꒱ ‧₊

Hi! Everything’s fine, thank you for the criticism, I respect any opinion. Personally, I believe AI is a great way to save time on minor things and let the creator focus on what really matters, such as CGs and the script. I don’t see anything wrong with using AI for translation or, for example, for backgrounds (which are not a significant part of the game). It really speeds up development and allows me to focus on more important aspects, as well as release chapters faster than once a year. Unfortunately, I can’t afford a team or hire artists for backgrounds or, say, translations, and I don’t want chapters to come out once a year or even less often, so this is the approach I’ve chosen. But I absolutely understand your point of view, it’s valid.:)

Yes!

Muito obrigada por um comentário tão detalhado e carinhoso, eu li tudo com um sorriso enorme no rosto 😭💜 Fico genuinamente muito feliz que a história, os personagens, a atmosfera e até o sistema de escolhas tenham te tocado dessa forma. Eu me esforço bastante para que as decisões realmente tenham peso e para que os personagens pareçam vivos, então a comparação com os jogos da Telltale é um elogio gigantesco para mim.

Também fico muito feliz que a dinâmica do grupo tenha parecido realista para você. Esse é um dos pontos mais importantes da história pra mim - fazer com que os personagens reajam não "porque o roteiro manda", mas como pessoas reais reagiriam em situações estranhas e estressantes.

Naomi ....💜 Fico imensamente feliz que você tenha se apaixonado por ela. Eu quis conscientemente fugir do clichê da "criança indefesa em histórias de terror" e criar alguém silenciosa, inteligente, observadora e, de certa forma, assustadoramente consciente. E sim, o MC basicamente "adota" ela, porque não tem como ser diferente. Concordo totalmente com você.

Sobre o Stefan e a comparação com o Keiji - achei isso muito interessante. Eu conheço bem o Keiji e também amo muito esse personagem, então entendo perfeitamente a associação. Mas, apesar de algumas semelhanças superficiais, em termos de vibe e energia eles são diferentes pra mim. Eles carregam tensões internas diferentes, motivações diferentes e uma presença bem distinta. Então você percebeu algo real, mas eles definitivamente seguem caminhos muito diferentes<3

Mais uma vez, obrigada por um comentário tão atencioso e emocional. Comentários assim realmente dão forças para continuar e aprofundar ainda mais a história ^^

haha, nono it's completely fine! i wouldn't notice that too tbh:D

It's when you pick an option "Say that he's cute." Though the blush is barely visible ♡

Thank you so, soooo much for such a thoughtful comment, it genuinely means a lot to me 🖤!!! I’m really happy you connected with the characters and the group dynamic, that’s honestly one of the most important parts of the story for me. Hearing that they feel real and relatable is probably the biggest compliment I could get. Naomi… yeah, she’s very dear to me too:)

As for romance: it’s not the main focus of the story, and it will never override the psychological and narrative core of the game. That said I won’t deny that there may be subtle romantic elements or optional undertones here and there, depending on characters, choices, and dynamics. I’m being very careful with this aspect, because it needs to feel natural and earned, not like a checklist feature if you know what i mean haha.

Oh and yes, I do plan to create Patreon because I see that there are some interested people who want to support me^^. I’m considering things like early access to new chapters for certain subscription tiers, but everything will stay optional and fair

¡Estaría muy, MUY agradecida por la ayuda! 🙏 Solo si no les supone ninguna molestia

¡Muchas gracias! Esto significa mucho para mí 💛

Y si no te es mucha molestia, ¿podrías decirme dónde desaparece exactamente la traducción al español? ¿Solo ocurre en el capítulo 2? Lamento que haya pasado, debe ser un error :(

La comunidad latina es increíble, de verdad. Les tengo mucho cariño 💛 gracias por estar aquí

Thanks all of you so much! I don’t really have much time to work on Discord right now since I’m focused on Chapter 3, but I’m incredibly happy that you’re here!

This honestly means so much to me, thank you 🥺💛
I’m really happy you’re enjoying the story and characters so far... Knowing that people are this invested genuinely keeps me going.

And thank you for even thinking about supporting the game! That alone already means a lot. When i open a Patreon, I’ll definitely let everyone know. For now, your support and kind words are more than enough 

谢谢你的支持！ 如果有足够多的人对中文翻译感兴趣（比如这条评论有大约5个赞)，我会考虑着手制作中文版本

Muchísimas gracias por un mensaje tan bonito y reflexivo, de verdad.  Me alegra muchísimo saber que la historia y los personajes lograron atraparte y hacerte pensar, eso significa mucho para mí.

Naomi es un personaje muy especial, así que leer que te sentiste reflejada en ella, incluso en su apariencia, me toca el corazón. Y ver que también te interesaron Vir y Leonel, con todas sus capas y contradicciones, me hace muy feliz. Sobre el tarot y los objetos… digamos que no están ahí solo para decorar 👀

Gracias también por querer apoyar el proyecto, incluso si ahora no puedes hacerlo en Patreon. El simple hecho de que sigas el juego, lo compartas y lo recomiendes ya es un apoyo enorme para mí. De verdad, gracias por estar aquí 💛

Oh! Thank you for the suggestion, I’ll give it some thought^^

I’m honestly not very familiar with Discord either like i said haha, but I’d love to be here and help however I can, even if it’s slowly!

Ay, muchísimas gracias, de verdad 💛 Me alegra muchísimo saber que la historia logra envolverte y que sientes esa conexión con la protagonista. Eso es exactamente lo que intento lograr, así que leer esto me anima un montón.

Y sobre Patreon: sí, de hecho lo estoy planeando 👀 Mi idea es abrir la página de Patreon justo antes del lanzamiento del capítulo 3. También estoy pensando en hacer acceso anticipado a la nueva chapter para la suscripción más alta, como una forma de agradecer a quienes quieran apoyar el proyecto un poquito más de cerca.

Oh wow, you have no idea how much your message means to me!! Seriously, reading this made me grin like a gremlin hehehe. Thank you for all your kind words and hype — aaand for falling under Vir's questionable charm). And Naomi is absolutely precious, I feel the same urge to wrap her in bubble wrap and never let her out of my sight! Saphira x Felicia wuh luh wuh confirmed...!? I wonder, what their ship name will be... Felira? Salicia?

About Patreon: you read my mind! I actually am planning to open a Patreon page right before Chapter 3 drops. My plan is to make early access to the new chapter available for the highest tier, so if you want to get your hands on it before anyone else (and support my caffeine habit), keep your eyes peeled!

Thank you for being so patient and for cheering me on<3

This is unbelievably sweet, thank you so much 😭💛

Hearing that the atmosphere and the characters feel real to you means more than I can explain. I pour a lot into making every interaction feel alive, so reading this honestly made my whole day.

Naomi getting this much love… I’m soft now. She deserves the world and more.

And Vir… well good luck catching him in the 3 Chapter. :3

Thank you again for the love and support, it genuinely means everything to me!

Aww, this is incredibly sweet, thank you so very much 😭💛 I truly appreciate this more than I can put into words.

I’ll be honest, I’m a bit of an old granny when it comes to Discord and I’m still not very good at understanding how everything works there haha… but I absolutely love this idea. I’m 100% on board with it if you’d like to try!

If it’s not too much trouble for you and you feel like giving it a shot, please go for it 😊 And feel free to message me directly on Discord as well, I’d be really happy to talk there! My username: sweepix.

Thank you again for being so thoughtful and kind, it truly means a lot to me !♡

Muchas gracias 🥹 Me hace muy feliz saber que amas tanto a Vir, de verdad. Gracias por todo el cariño que le das al personaje.

Y lo del estilo… que lo compares con YKMET me honra muchísimo, gracias:)

Welcome back!! I’m genuinely so happy you returned and took the time to write this, I was really looking forward to your thoughts. Thank you so much for such a heartfelt and detailed response. Knowing that the story and the cast were able to evoke these emotions means more to me than I can properly put into words...

I’ll admit, I had a feeling Vir might have that kind of effect… but who am I to judge, really. In the end, he’s just a completely innocent, misunderstood  angel 😇 (Also, the “survival instincts of a pickle” line genuinely made me giggle :D)

I really wish there were more spaces where people could talk about Mind the Gap. One of my biggest hopes is that, over time, a small community can form where players share theories, emotions, and impressions. For now, I’m just praying to the algorithms and word of mouth.🤞

And honestly, if there’s even a chance to recommend the game to a friend who might enjoy visual novels, that already means a lot. I know the genre isn’t for everyone and that’s okay.

Thank you again, truly, for your support and kindness. I’ll do my best to take care of myself and keep working at a healthy pace. I’m planning to start writing Chapter 3 later this week 💛

Thank you so much!! I’m glad Vir stole your heart ♡

Gracias!💕 esto me calienta mucho el corazón. (Saphira es una leyenda, sin discusión)

Aw, thanks you so much!!♡♡♡

I’m currently putting all my focus into Chapter 3, so that’s where all my resources are going right now.
But If enough people ask for it (let’s say 5 comments or likes), I’ll definitely consider  Portuguese translation💛

Right now I’m fully focused on developing Chapter 3, and all of my time and energy are going into that.

However! If there’s enough interest... for example, 5 comments or likes asking for a russian translation — I’ll be happy to work on it!

¿¿¿QUÉÉÉÉ??? Jajajaja, Vir pensará en tu propuesta…
¿EN SERIO tienes fotos suyas pegadas en tu habitación?? 😭💛 Y si quieres más contenido de Vir, sígueme en Tumblr.  Pronto subiré un nuevo arte con él hehe ✨

Eso es tan lindo <3🤔🤗

¡¡¡AAAAA muchas gracias por crear una cuenta solo para decir esto, de verdad!!!😭🩷 Me hace muy feliz saber que la novela te enganchó tanto. No puedo prometer que Leonel sea un love interest, ya que el enfoque de la historia no es lo romántico…pero puedo asegurarte que aún habrá interacciones MUY interesantes con él 👀✨

Gracias por el apoyo, significa muchísimo para mí!:)

Thank you, I’m really glad the game keeps you on edge! Your kind words about the art and the story means a lot to me^^

And about Vir… haha, I’ve seen this suspicion before, but we'll see, we'll see...😇

Muchísimas gracias por animarte a escribir y por compartir algo tan bonito 🥺 De verdad significa muchísimo para mí saber que el juego pudo atraparte así. Comentarios como el tuyo me motivan a seguir trabajando y cuidando cada detalle. La próxima actualización llegará con calma, pero con mucho cariño. Gracias por estar aquí ♡♡♡

¡El juego ya está en español!

AHH welcome back!! I’m so happy you’re getting attached to the characters😭💛
The questions and confusion are very intentional, so you’re exactly where you’re supposed to be...

And yeah, It’s still a bit of a quiet corner of the internet... so, If you ever feel like talking about the game or sharing it somewhere, that kind of support truly helps more than you can imagine. I seriously appreciate your support, it means the world<3

Thank YOU so much, this means a lot to me !!!!💛

I’m really glad the mystery hooked you, there’s much more to come in the future. As for Vir… yeah. He’s a menace and I’m not stopping him lol. 

Thank you for the love and the excitement,  it reeeaally means the world to me 🫶

I mean… trusting Vir blindly is a bold choice 🤔🤔 Thank you so much for reading!! I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story ♡

Muito obrigada!! Fico muito feliz em saber que gostou do desenvolvimento do Vir. Ele ainda tem muito a mostrar, então espero que você goste do próximo capítulo também ♡

Thank YOU so much for playing! I really hope the translation isn’t too painful to read haha. 😅 And yes, I’ll definitely take a small break, thank you 💛