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I like the theme! I think changing the size of some obstacles would help since they all look the same

I like the variety of obstacles! I think adding more designs so that there's a theme would help.

I like the designs, for me it was a little hard completing it so maybe making it a little more easier would help!

Cool drawings! More choices would help a lot

Cool concept and effects! More context of the story could help with images

Amazing drawings! Perhaps including online images could help

Cool effects! More text would help a lot

Fun concept! Adding images would make it even better

I had a similar idea! It's very creative and it would be even better with more text effects

Fun story with a lot of text, would love to read more!

Very creative and interesting choices!