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Bugs:

When jumping on the last moving platform the character spaz out and gets pushed to the side of the platform but hovers at the same time. 

Falling through the first moving platform (caused by holding space and the platform is moving up)

Strengths:

Comical scenario of a bird taking a persons wallet 

Giving the player the option to get something to improve their character (the coffee double jump)

Weaknesses:

Make the wealth counter a bit more noticeable in the top right

Changes/Improvements 

Continue to develop the game 

Unsure on what to change

Bugs: 

The character can fall out of the map by walking far left or far right beyond the floor 

Strengths:

Health bar, monster sprite, character sprites and the gameplay are done well

Weakness:

The platforms can be hard to time with the player falling too soon (or I'm not good at the game)

The number of mushrooms the player has collected could be displayed more clearly

Change/Improvement:

Add a start menu for the player so they have time to react to avoid the monster

Bugs:

When hugging the left wall at the start it vibrates the screen 

I can leave the map by going to the bottom right corner of the map (no walls that blocks the character)

Strengths:

I like the sprite's expressions and the theme of them being in the forest 

Weakness:

Unclear on what is a wall and where is a place to go 

No animation (unless you haven't got to that point yet)

Changes/Improvements:

Continue to develop the game 

Make the wall of the game a bit more noticeable (maybe change the colour or add in a different texture like a log)

Further develop the character sprites with some colour

Bugs

When starting screen I was able to move the character without the screen disappearing. This also caused the character to be invisible.

(I think I was able to do this when going in and out of the full screen feature)

Can't walk through the water near the start

Some of the game loads on the right side when out of full screen 

Strengths 

The characters and showing there types of personalities 

Weaknesses 

The stars a bit more noticeable (make them bigger or more bolder)

Problems with the starting screen

Changes or Improvements 

Change the stars a bit (make them bigger or more bolder)

Have a re look with the starting screen and see what may cause the bugs 

Bugs:

Multiple coding errors

Strengths:

Great build up in story and giving the player multiple options for a different ending 

Character speaking 

Weakness:

It is hard to rate without the code working and the imagery needing to be fixed 

Changes/Improvements:

Add some pictures and look through the coding

Bugs: 

The second and top branches on the right makes the player fall despite there is ground for them to stand on. 

Strengths:

The animations and textures of the game along with the glow effects of the lamps and the characters lamp on the stick

Weaknesses:

The falling through the branches does catch the player off guard and can take its toll to go back to were the player was originally before the fall

Changes or Improvements:

Fix the branches that the player falls through and to continue the rest of the game at the top of the tree.

Bugs:

When moving to the right part of the level I was able to exit the map by clicking the pink blocks (although that is a mechanic in the game).

Strengths:

Despite the game is currently made of coloured blocks I understood what I was looking at when clicking the different 

Weaknesses:

There isn't much on what is going on what the player's goal is when playing through the game. 

Changes or Improvements:

Giving the coloured blocks some sprites and a bit more direction with what the player has to do. 

Also telling the player they can click of different objects on the screen would help show the game better.