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I played through all of Pizza Quest and I LOVED it! I wasn't expecting such a funny game, the wifi gag seems like an inside joke but it was so cute how you kept calling back to it even in the magic skills.

Overall I want to congratulate you on such a well-rounded first game. You fit in a lot of mechanics and gameplay without overdoing anything. Implementing puzzles (I don’t even know how to do some of those lol), timers, balancing the fights, there is a lot you had to learn.

There is a lot of attention to detail I really appreciated. I tried to walk back to previous areas or places I wasn’t supposed to go to yet, and you always accounted for that with the main character saying things like “We have to go to work first”, ect…

And I loved how you implemented your art in the background, sprites, and busts. I particularly liked how you did the light from the windows in the castle hitting the floor. That was a nice bit of ambience.

Honestly I was pretty bad at the pizza art puzzle. I had to reload my save a lot before I realized it’s easier than it looks😂

I don’t have much critique to give you, I’m just impressed that this is your first game and you did so many cool gameplay and art ideas in such a short time. If I could say one thing it might be to check for typos and sentence flow. Sometimes the sentences ran on a bit too much or were difficult to read at first. Following and I’d love to see what kinds of games you make in the future!

(reposting from my review because I didn't realize reviews are private lol)

Thank you for saying so! It really motivates me to hear it. No release date I can set yet, but the final demo (about an hour of content) will release sometime in the next few months!

Thank you for saying so, it'll keep me going through the slog🥲

Wow, this just made my day, that's awesome!! I'm using rpgmaker mz

This is really wonderful critique, I have it somewhere on my list to fix the frame overlay I have but I hadn't considered it's a bit too much (this is because I'm staring at this thing every damn day lol). Rest assured I'm going to tone it way down and probably have an extra frame or 2 to break up that jittery feeling. Thank you for telling me, I'm eager and anxious for any feedback!

Thank you so so much! It's so encouraging to see your comment before I start my weekend work on the game lol. I'm planning on the full demo to release this year, which will actually promise on the whole knife-wielding clown, carnival, interesting character dynamic side lol

thank you for reaching out! I don’t need any help at this time but it’s very kind of you to offer it! I wish you the best of luck with your works 🙂

Thank you so much for trying it out!! The video made my day, you're one of the first to do so, so it means a lot. Hope you stick around for the demo demo and full release!