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• Viability: Game is playable for the most part. I did run into an issue where the game doesn't restart after I die and the monster just kind freeze in place. 
• Presentation: Rules are simple and straight forward. I do believe someone who doesn't play a lot of games would benefit from a control screen though.
• Theme: Theme is clear and interesting. I love the designs and overall aesthetic. 
• Engagement: Very engaging. Was fun fighting the monsters and everything.

• Viability: The game is very playable but I did run into a few issues where my player seemed to get stuck on objects not mater was directional key I pressed. I also ran into an issue where my character went off screen and never came back.
• Presentation: Rules are clear and understandable. Look for exits avoid enemies.
• Theme: The theme is very clear and the cover art definitely shows. 
• Engagement: The game is a lot of fun and I would really like to play more. I am just a bit bad at it.

Viability: Game is playable from beginning to end. I think the affection being a number you need to raise is cool but I think it would look nicer in a separate box rather than just in the text.

Presentation: The rules were pretty straightforward. I do wish there were a few more options to choose from.

Theme: Theming is fun. Since the game is not very dialogue heavy I really think it would benefit from images. 

Engagement: Entertaining. I love that you got a chance to name the griffin. I always like little befriending animal games.

Viability: The game is playable from beginning to end. The only thing I would change is from the game over screens I making the restart point after the big walls of text because clicking through them every time I failed got a bit tedious

Presentation: The rules are understandable but I would have the now text pop up maybe a millisecond slower.

Theme: Theming is really fun and charming. I love your art style!

Engagement: Very engaging I kept replaying until I got the good ending

Viability: Game is playable from beginning to end. It would have been fun to see the other routes though. If you are having trouble with finishing them maybe you could have some purposeful dead ends so you are not overloading yourself.

Theme: Theming is good and fits with colors and characters well.

Engagement: Descriptions are very beautiful. They do get a bit wordy from time to time though. Also the blocks of texts are a bit hard to read sometimes so maybe break up the text in more passages?

Presentation: Rules are understandable and clear.