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Hi, I don't know which way is best to reach you, but I thought I'd just leave a comment here.

Well I really enjoyed the story you've written, although I have spotted quite a bit of language quirks, grammer and the such, of which I'd love to help you out with!

I'd love to proof-read (looking for and fix gramatical errors, as well as trying to make the reading experience a better flow) for you.

If you're interested, hit me up eg. on discord: Sproxxy#6662.

Thanks for the great story otherwise!

SO excited to see the full release some day, even this short demo got me "excited" holy crap!

I think its funny that, the bear in the game is named "bjørn" as its not only a name in Norwegian/Danish, but it's also the word for bear in those languages!

I think they're planning on releasing a sequel soon