First of all, I absolutely loved the demo of the game and can't wait to play it in full one day. I've always enjoyed those "pick your own ending" style books growing up, so I'm so glad I found this game. The writing and storytelling for multiple paths was very fun, and I liked the option to customise your character and their backstory.
While I was playing through, there were just a few minor errors, so I tried to go back and find them so I could let you know. I may have missed a few, but here are some that I noticed.
1. Near the beginning of the "treasure hoarders" backstory, there is a paragraph repeated at one point. The one that reads, "'Either way, we could've made good use of that 'costly stuff'..." appears two times in a row.
2. Farther down on that same page, in the text, there is a portion that reads, "</span>", which I didn't think was supposed to be included on the on screen text (I could be completely wrong, sorry)
3. During the portion where you are supposed to sign the contract, one option, "If that was a challenge, you weren't about to turn it down. You stubbornly kept signing with your false name." leads to a blank page with no text.
4. When you talk to Fri, after giving a false name instead of a made up one, he still refers to you with the real name he doesn't know.
5. When you are given a description about the grown up version of Muir, there is a segment that is repeated twice that reads something like, "He has grown tall and rangy, his body wrapped...".
The only other issue I had while playing was that there wasn't more of the adventure. I really enjoyed the demo and can't wait to read more. Please never stop creating works of art, this was so good. 馃