You have firm, solid ground you're working on. This looks like it'll be amazing. I genuinely can't wait to see this project grow bigger! If you ever need a volunteering proofreader, I've worked on other games, please do let me know! <3
You have strong foundation settled down. The art is great, and the writing is comprehensible, has few to no mistakes at all, and an interesting story to boot! Super excited to see where you take the rest of this story!