I am feeling kinda ambivalent towards this game. The prose is often very verbose, other times bland. It reads more like fanfiction, which is fine for what it is. Yet sometimes it does shine, especially in more emotional or silly moments.
The game mechanics are the worst about this game, there is a lot of repetitive combat with meaningless enemies and the sex fights too just become boring after having encountered the enemy already 10 times. Luckily you can skip those. The fights against special enemies are always gimmick fights and so it seems like the rpg mechanics were more so an afterthought, existing now disconnected as a separate - and for the lack of smut - worse game.
The base building mechanic feels similarly; it gets you no rewards until the very end game and mostly just feels like a drag; the timed raids for resources and long walks through your own dungeon to upgrade buildings deliberately stealing your time.
As for the characters, the girls often seem uninteresting to me because they fall too much into the harem follower category. The boys at least seem to be competitive and confronting the player much more on their own. Passivity is fine for some characters, but since quests already are deliberately engaged by the player, I think the characters should at least be allowed to push the player a bit more around.
I like what the catboy wizard did at the very beginning, standing in the way of the player and telling them how they will have them, while the player still isn't acquainted with the mechanics and so very well might lose to him and for the same reason encountering him the three times was pretty fun.
All in all I really like what this game is trying to do, but maybe making it more narrative focused would have been the better choice. I already liked how many scripted encounters it had, but the game mechanics feel like unnecessary filler that strips away the joy I had from those.