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I certainly shall! I'm looking forward to seeing what else you come up with, you've done a lot with a (comparatively) small amount of text here, and I was particularly impressed by your ability to keep both the vibes and pacing tight and I think this story really benefited from being a VN with "choices" rather than straight prose, it really helped sell the feeling of being in the MC's place. I'll be keeping an eye out for anything you post here, but if you do end up posting other prose work elsewhere (or feel brave enough to link what you've already written), Please let me know, or reach out for DMs! I won't be upset if you necro this thread like, months down the line, lol.
Took me several tries to find the bad pet ending, very fun! I feel like there should be multiple ways to get there, if there are I'm clearly just too much of a bottom to have found them. Very enjoyable and short narrative, satisfying lore drops on subsequent play-through's, and the fact that there aren't really branching paths isn't a weakness here like it might be in other VN's because of how it fits into the ludonarrative, excellent execution on that idea in my opinion, and enjoyable prose.
I'm not the first to say this, but my only complaint is that there isn't more! Do you write anything else that you've published, VN or not? I'd be interested in checking out more of your work if you have an AO3 page or something similar.