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Thank you! This words means a lot to me. 🥰 I'm sorry if my English are not perfect but I'll keep trying my best! 

Whatever your going to comment, I won't bother to check anymore. Because I won't waste my time to someone who can't comprehend that this game however offensive it may be doesn't shackle you to the ground to play it. :) If you really hate this game, and hate me so much, then go... Don't reply to this, don't click this game, and don't recommend this or save this game. Because seeing you commenting and replying  means that this game interest you so much you want to point your view and influence me. And yet here I am telling you, that's how the game is to portray the plot. 

Besides, "Too much jealousy is toxic"  which is true because sometimes jealousy makes one people go to desperate means (this is implying one of the bad ending the MC might get) and "we are a certified bitch with a class we don't play like a thot my brad'ah" this is implying to the way the lovers of MC can think when max jealousy meter is reached. I'm not saying the MC can't flirt to hundreds of people. She/He can but not too much which may lead to one of the bad endings. Now, I'll shut my mouth before I get to tell all the plot points in this story :) 

Then leave.... I don't even get why you keep replying to me. As I have said, if you don't want to play then don't play. It's not like the whole world is ending dude! I'm offensive and horrible alright I am... Would that make you happy now? I guess you are. If you don't have anything to do, I suggest you go read and play games who doesn't offend you so much. The world doesn't only revolve around my game. There are other interesting and beautiful interactive games out there you can play and yet you found mine and have an interest to keep replying to my post even if I clearly laid out a warning before you play the game. I even gave an option not to play it and the only way you can play again is by restarting. So I won't even bother now, dude.. I guess you love badmouthing people so much it's your hobby. You can't even take a hint. :) 

Its not like I want to insult or bash Polyamorous people. What I meant in that quote is that MC should lessen flirting too much, especially if they already choose a lover.  Besides, Inside this game, people are much more discriminating not just in women or men but also in what they choose as a lover. This is what my warning triggers implied. (Gender and age discrimination) This is so I could highlight the old medieval ways of the story in Alvion. This is one of the main plots where MC at a certain age has the power to change history when they become an empress/emperor... That's why I input the other option of not playing it and moving on to the other game. You have an option not to play it, ignore it and even tell it nicely and yet you choose to use words that are not nice in itself.. You don't have to play it if this game is insulting. :)

Excuse me, im referring to the constant flirting which may lead to jealousy and not the the MC being toxic. Im sorry if that's what your interpretation about my writing as i have said, its not my main language. Its your choice anyways if you don't want to play, no one is forcing you :) 

Oh my ghad thank you for everything!! Sorry for not updating lately... Your reply did not discourage me at all in fact,  it made me realize my mistakes and laugh at myself.  I really appreciate someone telling me what to improve because that means they care about me or my story (in my own opinion let me dream alright..  ).  Thanks for thinking highly of this story but I am sorry to break this I would love to continue it but I don't think I can right now.  It is because of my laptop ( the one I'm using to type this and comfortably use)  broke and I don't have anything to use to continue it (I was actually have another story to post and was refining this story,  removing ellipses and checking grammars at grammarly ps.  I LOVE YOU GRAMMARLY but my laptop sadly shows red screen and all. Good thing I have my good ole USB for saving the stories before it became like that.  This is the reason why I can't post and update it yet.) I don't know if I can still fix it It's been with me for 6 or 9 years so the screen starts leaking something idk... So my plan for now was to postpone this story and continue this after I have my job to buy myself brand new laptop or have enough money to repair it.  Unfortunately,  Its a very long year and process to wait. So maybe when I get back to this story,  my writings will be boring and the story will be different. Imean- I need to graduate from grade 12 (my year right now with my friend Thesis and research I HATE THEM!!)  and take my collage course so yup looooonggg way to go.. I will not promise anything because who knows what will happen right? But all I can say is that I WILL TRY to continue this when opportunities make it.  So for now,  I will take your suggestions and corrections at my heart and hope you will be here when I come back again to continue this story.  Anyways Thank you again and Lab yah bradah Happy hearts day!  

Hi! Oh my god, I was ecstatic when I read your comment! AHAHAHAHAHAH.. I was writing chapter 1 and I decided to check my itch.io account and I saw this. First of all, thank you for finding my writing okay. I mean I was really struggling with how to put my own ideas from my language into English.  As my dialect really distracts me from making a good story even now I'm struggling to make the grammar fit what I imagine it would look.  I really appreciate this comment so much so thank you!!..  Second, about Liam. HAHHAHAHA I made him purposely  attached to the player right from the start to clearly emphasize the MC's personality.. I won't spoil anything but I'll assure you one thing.. The prologue is not the end of Liam's journey... Third and last.. The chapters.. As I was saying I was really busy at my school as an active student writing thesis and projects ( I snuck my free time to do the prologue and a little bit of styling this game.. I slightly regret a little bit because my teacher got mad when I passed my introduction in thesis.. HAHAHHAHHA I deserve it I know... ) so I don't know if I can post the chapter and portray the story well but I'll try my best to work faster. First thing first I should really finish my thesis before anything else.. Anyways.. Thank you for your comment you made my day awesome.. I hope to see you in the next chapter uploads..Toodles!! :P 

Hm.. I think He is busy with another girl?.. I'm not sure but when I tried to call him and I survive, the MC told that the boyfriend is cheating and that she deserve better than that man..  

LETS GOOOO!!! I'm waiting for this.. It's time my brothers and sisters 

I tried my best :)

I am already in love with ruby acting as the " Best mom " in the game. 

Why am I stuck at dying when I start the game?.. I don't even get the full experience to play it.. :( 

Heya!.. I just want to say that this game is so promising!.. I just played it today and I really enjoyed it. I love how the game is pretty realistic you know like if I'm really in that situation, I would also feel and think like that. Keep it up!! :) 

Oh yeah Thank you.. I thought I choose something wrong in the previous choices that's why he's doing that.. Glad I didn't.. Anyways Thank you for the reply!!.. This is really a great game!.. Thank you for making it!! 

This is a great game and i love every parts of it I just wonder... Is it just me or I did something wrong for the game to punish me by showing a bunch of " ........ " ?.. I am a persistent person at first but when i noticed that i been clicking it more than I can count I stopped hahahaha.. Please I really love this game and I want to see if there is something wrong I done.. Thank you in advance

This game is magnifico that's all I have to say... DAMN so Fire!.. I love the plot and every interactions.. I'm booking it on my Bookmark hahahha and wait for the update!..