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Oh my ghad thank you for everything!! Sorry for not updating lately... Your reply did not discourage me at all in fact,  it made me realize my mistakes and laugh at myself.  I really appreciate someone telling me what to improve because that means they care about me or my story (in my own opinion let me dream alright..  ).  Thanks for thinking highly of this story but I am sorry to break this I would love to continue it but I don't think I can right now.  It is because of my laptop ( the one I'm using to type this and comfortably use)  broke and I don't have anything to use to continue it (I was actually have another story to post and was refining this story,  removing ellipses and checking grammars at grammarly ps.  I LOVE YOU GRAMMARLY but my laptop sadly shows red screen and all. Good thing I have my good ole USB for saving the stories before it became like that.  This is the reason why I can't post and update it yet.) I don't know if I can still fix it It's been with me for 6 or 9 years so the screen starts leaking something idk... So my plan for now was to postpone this story and continue this after I have my job to buy myself brand new laptop or have enough money to repair it.  Unfortunately,  Its a very long year and process to wait. So maybe when I get back to this story,  my writings will be boring and the story will be different. Imean- I need to graduate from grade 12 (my year right now with my friend Thesis and research I HATE THEM!!)  and take my collage course so yup looooonggg way to go.. I will not promise anything because who knows what will happen right? But all I can say is that I WILL TRY to continue this when opportunities make it.  So for now,  I will take your suggestions and corrections at my heart and hope you will be here when I come back again to continue this story.  Anyways Thank you again and Lab yah bradah Happy hearts day!  

Hi! Oh my god, I was ecstatic when I read your comment! AHAHAHAHAHAH.. I was writing chapter 1 and I decided to check my itch.io account and I saw this. First of all, thank you for finding my writing okay. I mean I was really struggling with how to put my own ideas from my language into English.  As my dialect really distracts me from making a good story even now I'm struggling to make the grammar fit what I imagine it would look.  I really appreciate this comment so much so thank you!!..  Second, about Liam. HAHHAHAHA I made him purposely  attached to the player right from the start to clearly emphasize the MC's personality.. I won't spoil anything but I'll assure you one thing.. The prologue is not the end of Liam's journey... Third and last.. The chapters.. As I was saying I was really busy at my school as an active student writing thesis and projects ( I snuck my free time to do the prologue and a little bit of styling this game.. I slightly regret a little bit because my teacher got mad when I passed my introduction in thesis.. HAHAHHAHHA I deserve it I know... ) so I don't know if I can post the chapter and portray the story well but I'll try my best to work faster. First thing first I should really finish my thesis before anything else.. Anyways.. Thank you for your comment you made my day awesome.. I hope to see you in the next chapter uploads..Toodles!! :P 

Hm.. I think He is busy with another girl?.. I'm not sure but when I tried to call him and I survive, the MC told that the boyfriend is cheating and that she deserve better than that man..  

LETS GOOOO!!! I'm waiting for this.. It's time my brothers and sisters 

I tried my best :)

I am already in love with ruby acting as the " Best mom " in the game. 

Why am I stuck at dying when I start the game?.. I don't even get the full experience to play it.. :( 

Heya!.. I just want to say that this game is so promising!.. I just played it today and I really enjoyed it. I love how the game is pretty realistic you know like if I'm really in that situation, I would also feel and think like that. Keep it up!! :) 

This game is magnifico that's all I have to say... DAMN so Fire!.. I love the plot and every interactions.. I'm booking it on my Bookmark hahahha and wait for the update!..