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It's not so bad at the beginning, but it's quite noticeable the further along the story progresses.  Your verb conjugations are often wrong, when you should be using the past continuous tense(was having) you tend to phrase it as a past perfect tense(had), things like that. Easy mistakes to make, but they affect the flow when reading. English is a very messy language, I would hate to learn it as a second language.

It's a good game, and the story line is decent, but the dialogue SERIOUSLY needs a proof-reader who speaks fluent english to go over it. It's not illegible, but it's kind of painful to read sometimes.

Your interpretation ALSO says more about you than it does about the game. It shows that you lack any real world experience in anything outside the vanilla.

If a brand prices themselves out of the market then they make nothing. If $8 is too much but $4 is not, and offering $4 means that you can attract 300 clients rather than 100, then you are actually killing your brand if you only offer $8.

That's just business.