Hey, played your game a bit and I was so fascinated with your art. Nice work!
Just for a heads up, there's a bug after the first choice. When I pick the first option, the story progressed a bit before it went stuck.
The same goes to the second option. It went unresponsive without moving to the next scene.
Hope you'll fix this, it would be a waste to leave it as it is since yours have so much potential. I'm looking forward for the fixed edition.