I couldn't help but feel that the story was a bit of a cliché...but, it does say, "To be continued...", so I look forward to seeing more of this. While this was a bit rough around the edges (though, considering the time constraints, it's not unexpected), it seems like a fantastic base for being fleshed out and growing into a full-blown story.
All in all, though? It was quite enjoyable. I liked it and am glad that I experienced it.