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Thank you for your kind words! I would like to say that we translated this the best way we can as non native JP speakers in the limited time we have but if you have any tips or pointers we will definitely contact you for it.

Don't be discouraged! To answer your question we did the song in 9 days since I encountered the event on the second day and it took 50 hours in total. Along with that, one of my friends (Yatsumerice) made the vocal arrangement and translation (Which I forgot to put in the itch.io submission page but it's on the youtube video). Thank you so much for your kind words and we wish you good luck in the contest as well - Angelica

Overall, we enjoyed the songs instrumental (reminded us of older visual tracks) but our main thing is that we suggest you improve the tuning of Miku (not that it's bad) since some points do sound a bit off.

Good song and strong composition.

You definitely have potential as a vocaloid artist! Shirosobi will be supporting you! (Angelica)

We really like the lyrics, tuning, and creativity of the song and it has a lot of potential, it did not feel like it overstayed it's welcome nor did it feel like it was too short. Our only criticism is that we wish the instrumentation could have a bit more variety unless it was intentionally made to be more simplistic. Overall, it's a good short song for a short jam and we enjoyed listening.
(Angelica) - I particularly like the vocals and tuning! 

Hello! Overall, we thought the song was quite fun to listen to, and the lyrics encapsulate the feeling of having your life being changed by a voicebank.
However, for some criticism we did enjoy the instrumentation although it did get repetitive throughout the course of the song due to the variety not being as wide.
(Angelica) In my opinion I feel like you could have added more variety to the instrumental especially halfway through the instrumental solo and the end of the instrumentals after Teto's final verse.

Hello! I really do enjoy the instrumentation of the submission, but I find it hard to hear the vocals of the song and the instrumentation overpowers LIEE. Overall, it is a good song, but I would enjoy it more if I could have heard it more clearly.