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Now that I finished the game, I have some feedbacks I wanted to share : 

- MC can go to stage 9 but there's no sprite for it, resulting in an error

- some events (mainly Lucy ones, from what I encountered) are marked at a specific place (club, beach...) but only triggers when going to the dorm

- I wish there was a way to lock a character in a specific level so it's easier to trigger events, sometimes they level up too fast, and some multi-character event can be hard to unlock

- It's not always clear what each stats does and which one would be best to upgrade a character

- some shop items doesn't show up when reloading the game (I unlocked the macarons, but the next time I opened my save they were gone)

- Also I don't know how complicated it would be, but it'd be nice to be able to see MC sprites

-and this one is more a want than a feedback, but I'd love a relationship option in the game, let us yuri everyone (officialy) !

Of course, none of this is a huge problem, the game is still amazing, I just wanted to let you aware of the issues I found ! I absolutely love your work !

Great game ! I didn't pay attention and tried desperatly to have Momo lv4, not realising she's a new girl and doesn't have one yet lmao (Now I fear it will skips all her progression when she'll get more levels added)

The artstyle is soooo pretty, I love it ! The pixel art truly gives a unique identity and it's masterfully created, all sprites are georgous and there's neat interactions/special events with all the girls.

Honestly, I don't have much to say, this game just does everything right ! I COULD nitpick on small things like "some dialogues are inconsistent or have bugs" or "the stats of everyone don't always match the sprites", but it would be unecessary mean when anything else is so damn good

Edit : 3 of my 5 favorite characters are the new girls from the newest update, so I'm so glad you added them (and so glad I discovered this game after they got added ! Can't wait to see more of them)

Game can be a little wordy, but other than that it's fantastic (I only did Britney's route rn)

Art is great, characters are really fun to follow (including the MC, which is rare for this type of game) and the story of the slow MtF transition with each steps of the way is really touching and endearing. The story looks like it barely started, but everyone is allowed to work at there own pace, and there's a lot of different routes so I won't complain much. 

The UI is also really refined which is always a big positive for me in VN

wish having max trans stat did more to help Zoey accepting herself, there's still a lot of insisting on he/him pronouns

obligatory "shame you used AI art"

That being said, pretty cool concept and visually neat UI

We need more growth card game, it's always fun and it goes well together

The story seems promising too, even if there isn't much right now

It needs a lot of balancing, tho

1. the slime girl keeps healing herself and nerfing us, but we can't do it ourself, which makes us heavely underpowered

2. the sizes snowball like craaaazy, since it's in % everytime it quickly gets to a point were one of the two character is way bigger than the other and it's gg

3. some characters have less HP for more arousal, but since HP are targeted way more often, those character are kinda useless (unless I just didn't find the correct strat)

hope it helps !

holy shit, pronouns option ??? Which means you're not forced to be male ?? Retweet to scare 90% of nsfw gamedev

The game is really really great ! The gameplay kinda reminds me of Papers, Please, which is very unexpected for a NSFW game, but very welcomed, since it's usually always the same gameplay loop

It isn't perfect tho, it's kinda annoying to have to redo an entire day when you fail something important, it would be nice to have a note somewhere that tells you when you could lock yourself out of the next day, so you can be extra carefull or reset early

Also unrelated and not a complaint, but I'm kinda confuse on why is the Skeleton's sprite not implemented yet, he doesn't seems to be the hardest to do and he shows up very often, I'd thought he would be top priority

Nonetheless, the game is still extremely good and I can't wait to see more of it !

I really like this ! A little short since there's only 4 growth stages + a temporary one (as far as I can tell) and everything can be unlocked quickly, but the overall quality is top notch

I love the use of colors and dialog boxes, it makes the game nice to look at, you don't see it often in this type of games, and it makes a huge difference ! It's also nice to be able to access a galery with most of the arts in the bedroom, including tips to unlock more

Shame you had to use AI gen, tho