I like this rewritten version better. The MC was not hostile to Bowers and actually got along better with him. Looking forward to more of the story.
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This brought a tear out of my eye the moment memento told Mori that what he said was not true. I felt bad for Mori since he then new that he did not live life the way he wanted to live it and that everything for him was about to end. The short story ends with them dancing. But after that scene and the story ends, I wonder how sad Memento felt after doing what he had to do to Mori? Obviously by how well he valued Mori's company, he certainly would have broken down in tears knowing that he will never see Mori again. I have always wondered what death would bring. Religious people are so sure that there is a heaven and a hell, but what if neither exist? What if nothing exist? What if something entirely different exist?
Yeah, he does look like a pro wrestler. He looks like he's over 300 to me. Plus, he is a football player and more of them these days are weighing well over 300. I like the three main characters. We have not seen much of Kamil yet, but he really seems like a really good and chill friend to Rex. Connor is totally in love with Rex. The relationship with Brendan is one where they both take things one day at a time and explore whether their relationship will grow.
I enjoyed watching you game these last couple of years. I learned a lot about Aboriginal Australian culture. I especially enjoyed Perrule the most because of his look and mostly because of his change in personality towards Kuddabang. I really enjoyed all of the characters. Thank you for making this vn.
I thought he was a little bit taller than that actually, like 205cm at the most. If you want to make him taller, that is fine. While it may not be possible to show him being taller in the screen, I think the current sprite of him compared to the other characters makes it obvious enough that he is atleast over 2 meters. You current sprite of Kamil does a good job of that.