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Great start to this story!

My favorite characters by chapter one are Rathian and Kirik. Rathian my ideal romance though. Although, the lore is a lot to keep up with sometimes (examples being many new lore definitions), and I do wish there were more responses in intimate scenes. 

For example, I was more cautious in being intimate with Kirik because I didn’t know if he was wanting to have sex or start an actual romance. I was hoping to have more opportunities to decide if I could break it off with him or not and see what Kirik’s reaction would be. Sometimes I like to have the characters EARN my intimacy than me saying “yeah let’s have sex” to progress a character’s arc.

I felt like Rathian was earning my intimacy by being understanding and insightful. He was always asking for my permission and you had the choice to make things more intimate or not. It felt more natural with Rathian than all of the characters to me.

Otherwise, keep up the good work! I love your art!

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the dom route is currently being worked on in the poly route, the creators are on break though right now.

I know right?! I’m not sharing in the poly route.

Loken is precious. Great VN! I love it!

The poly route seems like an interesting idea. Question is though can I date Russell solo? I don't want to have a threesome or share with Dom and Axel. Russel is mine! Will certain choices lead to outcomes through out this route?  Great VN by the way, keep up the great work! I'd just do regular updates with your audience though as long gaps in communication does tend to worry readers if the VN is still in development or not.

I absolutely loved this VN! I binged read for the past four days and I'm absolutely in love with this series. As a writer myself, I applaud the author for making great complex characters and having good pacing throughout the story. The universe is interesting and I'm eager to learn more about Dryz and see Richter and Lyall's relationship grow in the next book! I would have to give this story a 9/10. Not to mention that the art looks very beautiful! One of the pictures made me flabbergasted at the amount of colors and detail in it. I added the soundtrack to my YouTube playlist as throughout the VN; the music enhances the scenes. For example, when Lyall's theme plays I get a sense of feeling safe in his presence and he is that person who you truly feel happy with.

I often be at a moment saying, "Damn, this music sounds really good!"

Keep up the great work and I subscribed to the patreon as well!

P.S. I love it when VN writers KNOW how to write complex characters because apparently some writers in the gaming industry can't write a complex character correctly leading to them being messed up!