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I really like the length of this interactive story. it's a good length for my stream, but not long enough to bore me. i finished it after streaming for 2 hours. depending on how committed you are you could probably finish it quicker. i appreciate the save option but i definitely didn't need it. there are a lot of typos but that's what you can expect from an Ace Jam game lol. pretty much the whole game needs proofread. there's one typo that i think was actually cute. it was one that used t instead of ed. or maybe i don't understand grammar well enough. either way i like it. at the risk of spoiling the story for someone, i was frustrated with Selena's hesitance to take Lydia back. i would hate to go back & see the ending where she never does. how can anyone replace a girl like Lydia? her being rich is a bit of a turn off for me personally but other than that she's fucking perfect in my opinion.

I'm a trans girl. pronouns: she/they. I got so pissed off reading this story. Lynn is fucking horrible & shouldn't be in Maya's life. I guess Lynn doesn't understand what romance is & how it differs from sexual attraction but that doesn't excuse her blatant homophobia. It's as if she was raised in the Klan. I hope the full version would make me feel better. I'm not ace but I am hyperromantic & I think I understand how Maya likes her relationships. I prefer to be with girls because men are too horny & don't seem to understand that I need romance. I mostly want to kiss & cuddle.