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Spelling/Grammar Notes and Clarification Questions:

1. Nestlobber's Nailflies upgrade says Buzzing Orb instead of Buzzing Gourd. Its Demistrain upgrade also says "thus unit" instead of "this unit."

2. Augur's Nihil Chant upgrade says "Prayer Of Darkness" instead of "Prayer To Darkness"

3. Last paragraph of Scavenger explanation says "lood" instead of "loot"

4. Kestrel's Fire! should read "gains +1D if doing so" instead of "gains if +1D doing so"

5. Needs to be a space between "Blade" and "once" in last portion of Canard's Path Of The Roach.

6. Rusty Nail Stance should say "at least" instead of "at last"

7. Wasteland Temple should say "At 8+ Shinies" instead of  "As 8+ Shinies" and "discard" instead of "iscard"

8. Relic's Crumbling Ruins upgrade says "orhotogonally" instead of "orthogonally"

9. Kindess' image is gone

10. Prophecy explanation under Special Tags says "Put the c" instead of "Put the card"

11. When picking random cards for Fluxgeist, are Special cards included in the pool of possible cards?

12. Sacrilege's Mockery says "Folded Things" instead of "Folded Wings"

13. Maybe I'm overlooking something, but I can't find any explanation of what "the Default Deck" actually is. 

14. Is it intentional that there's no Thorn 3-2 card?

The name of the 3rd upgrade for the Adlagala is missing.

UPDATE: The image breaking appears to only be happening when I look at the PDF on my phone. When I look at it on my laptop everything is normal, so maybe it's just a me problem.

The 2.0 update appears to have broken A LOT of the images? The title page, the necromancer on every Faction intro page, the Coffin Bearer, the Excavator, the Orator, the Effigy, the Grubs, the Horde, the Starved, the Podge, the Face Melter, the Bog Body, and the Shepherd have all been either deleted entirely or replaced with corrupted-looking silhouettes of themselves. I don’t know if this is like an ARG thing going on or if the PDF data got super jacked up somehow.

I noticed a lot of the pages in the new Wandering Monster section have words that are specifically missing the letter w (ith instead of with, reard instead of reward, anted instead of Wanted, etc). I'm not sure if there's something up with your keyboard or what but it's an oddly specific issue.

Errors/Typos/Questions:

1. Invocation of Decay - The description cuts off early ("Trigger: Turn start. 1 Vulnerable or").

2. First bullet of Egregore explanation - "f it is destroyed" should be "if it is destroyed"

3. Third bullet of Egregore explanation - "If an Egregore is destroyed, deal 1 Devil Damage to 1." I presume "1" should be "its Norn"?

4.  Fourth bullet of Egregore explanation - "The first an attached" should be "The first time an attached"

5.  Seventh bullet of Egregore explanation - "the Egregore is pulled until it is 2 in range 2". The first "2" should be deleted.

6. Lykho - "Grim Danse" should be "Grim Dance" based on the upgrades' text.

7. I don't see any explanation for how the "Special:" tag on many Oneirica abilities works. Does that mean it has to come from the Egregore to activate, since 3/4 are labelled "Oneirica Special"? But that's already what "Wake:" does, and some abilities have both Special AND Wake.

8. Chorus of Voices - "Any your ability" should be "Any of your abilities"

9. Necromancer Soul Upgrades - There's nothing listed after "Trigger:" for My Hopes or My Dreams. 

10. Kindness' "Being" - "hollowity" should be "hollowness"

11. Anger's "Hatred" - "made ith +1D" should be "made with +1D"

12. Fear's "Survival" - "ith a foe." should be "with a foe."

13. Pride's "Finality" - "Sipe" should be "Swipe"

14. Pride's "Shatteredness" - "If it had no armor, it instead immediately takes 1 damage, ignoring armor." Everything after "1 damage" can be deleted. As established, that unit has no armor to ignore.