I liked the artwork and music. They felt the theme without being unpleasant. The writing really sold me on the premise and got me to understand the psychology of the MC. But, the ending didn't work for me. There was no catharsis. Nothing was resolved. I don't understand why MC was obsessed with Asher or why Asher saved MC or why Asher bothered showing up. This feels more like a teaser than a complete story. So basically to secure my endorsement, you would need to make a sequel that explains everything.
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A member registered Nov 09, 2019