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It's refreshing to see that a developer has a pretty set roadmap this early into development, so kudos for that. You say that Lori and Luna will have "routes" , but you don't want to have Lincoln steal them from their respective relationships to avoid NTR (I would argue it's more Netori than Netorare, as you would be the MC)and to expect trios. So Lori and Luna are going to be willing to do lewd things with Lincoln, but not outright form a relationship? Sooo, sisters with benefits kind of thing? In the demo I don't know if you intend to do it as a one time thing, but that scene if you choose to peep in the shower, that dark and horny sprite of Lincoln that comes out for those few lines I feel could be used more, kind of a side to him that comes out that would push him to do things he normally wouldn't consider doing~
Overall though I think this game has some great potential! The art is very impressive, from the character design to the backgrounds. The writing could use a little more polish, but where it's at now is not bad at all. I see on the roadmap you are working on music and sounds, I personally don't think you need to worry too much about those two so early in development. A lot of the most popular NSFW games don't have music or sounds, when you are playing a lewd game I think the most important aspects are the story and the scenes. While I am going through a lewd scene the last thing on my mind would be "Damn, some music would of made this scene just right." If anything if the music just isn't my taste I am turning off the music a lot of the time in the games. Anywho, I'll wrap this up hahaha. Looking forward to seeing more, you'll have my support on your Fanbox.

This spin-off game gives me what I was desperately wanting from the main In Heat game, some more quality/sexy time with the characters. Looking forward to more of the story of the characters and the main story itself. Hopefully we can have lots more interactions with Poppi and Sammy going forward, but I am excited to be introduced to new characters too, like Prinny. Them hips..EXTRA THICCC.