The story is great but I have some criticism for NSFW scenes, the dialogue are great but the scenes itself could use more improvement like give the player the choice to interact during NSFW scenes and I guess don't flash to White on climax 馃槄, anyways the story so far is great, also a question this is a solo project yeah?
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it's good, very good. But the dialogue seems off a little bit. I mean our teacher literally pulled up and tell us that she know about our power and somehow we don't even question it. Also it's kinda random for Dai and the other guy to suddenly be all buddy with us. I mean it would had been better if the topic of money was brought by maybe them hearing gossip about our financial situation or some shit? Regardless the game deserve praises for the elite animation and transition but have setback because of its dialogue, it's understandable though it's hard to write story afterall. Overall solid 7.5/10